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Powerful beginning. Will be watching/reading this :)

I read this and it was GOOD! I was upset when I got to the end of the page and there was no more. I think that his friends should have given him one more day. She wasn't from that era so she should have been returned to her own family. I understand that he was up set with Sesshoumaru, but his friends should bear some of the blame also as well as the grief. Patiently waiting for the next chapter.

Excellent start! I'm looking forward to your next chapter ^.^