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for A Fine Mess

by Vyper

person natasha
schedule October 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow great story! i really can't wait for more, hope you are able to update soon.
schedule October 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What are ya doin have u moved yet come on girl I want to know what happens next me and your fans aare waiting upDATE UPDATE
person nchsmi
schedule August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good luck w/ the move.

B reading U!
schedule August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol. Short sweet and to the point. Yup very Sesshy! Thanks
schedule August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
His sword will jump up and hit him one day for not listening to it.
person nchsmi
schedule August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Damn that was kind of cold, even 4 him! I hope his sword will start burning him in the side, and InuYasha makes him use it on her. Something is very wrong about her dying. She was greedy, but she was also a pawn, too. Besides, he's had his revenge now. He got to kill her. So now he can bring her back, and move on.

Great chapter...B reading U!
schedule July 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
They let her in and Sesshoumaru is coming?!? It's almost like thet want her to die.
schedule July 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thats all fine and dandy, but oh when Sesshoumaru finds the witch that helped cause all of their problems I would hate to be her. What will he say to Sango that she might accept his offer and will she be wiling to leave her home, husband and friend behind?
schedule July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Really good story... very enjoyable - finally caught up to current chapter. wont Inuyasha get to meet any of Sesshy's other kids?? Thanks so much.
person nchsmi
schedule July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love the new chapter! Have I told u how much I love Lady Luna? She's the ultimate Mommie!!!! The perfect mix of loving and strictness that the 3 Inu boys need in their lives! I enjoy reading this story, I can't wait till u post again...B reading U!