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Great story please continue

Awesome chapter ...I didn't realize i had missed out on some other works of yours...i gotta catch up now. 

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...Is this story complete?

This was cool

I read all 38 chapters, very enjoyable. Had quite the mix pain & fun, such is life. Is that the end of your story, ending with the mischievous grandfather? or do the saga continue?

Ahh, what a sweet chapter! Little Himeiko sounds adorable! And, poor InuYasha. I know just how he feels! It wasn't long after my first child was born, before my hubby wanted to get back in the saddle so to speak! Anywho...Nice job on this chapter!

Till next time...

B reading U!

i have read some of your stories. like all authors, some stories are better then others. with this story, while good, has some key issues. first, i feel you are rushing things, realistically the emotions and circumstances would take more time. also the timeline of events both current and in the backstory (sesshy and inus history/family) are confusing and abit ooc. what about inus emotional trauma, they just dissapeared, which is unsatisfactory and unrealistic. also it seems you like afew other authors hit the same wall on mpreg. i dont like sex changes in the middle of the story or at all for the mpreg. be more imaginitive and original. you have demon gentics and magic on your side and all you could come up with is a gender change? to me it isnt yaoi if the preg male turns female to have a baby. i could accept it if it was at the start of labor or on inus human night, but for the entire pregnancy? that sucks, and is just my opinion. i also feel it is offensive to the world of inuyasha. im not finishing this

great story please update

great more please