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August 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yes i read it again here and had to review to thank you for this story.
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August 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Are those birth control pills for human males or are they strong enough for demon sperm? There is a difference. For my part, I like a pregnant Kagome. I think that would add a lot of extra spice and maybe even some turmoil. I like Hachi. I hope he becomes a friend to Kagome.
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August 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Damn you! Stopping before she actually goes into the buiding!
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August 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow I am so glad that you decide to go on with your story. I loved the first one and I'm looking forward to this one as well, I can't wait to see what will happen next, Kagome already seems like she wants to die, well not really but I know how she feels.
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July 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You have a very real, honest and promising beginning to a great fic. I'm looking forward to seeing how this spins out.
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April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
sweet i loved the first story im glad you made a second please update soon
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April 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG.....you came back!! and ur doing a sequel the one of the greatest stories i've ever read....*continues to worship*
u have no idea how much this means to me!!
u have no idea how much this means to me!!
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April 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!
I read it twice, just so i could have something to hold on to. sigh it was a great opening it was brilliantly done as u didnt let the readers miss a beat, poor kags i really imagine how she is feeling. i like souta as well, how old is he here? I love how u didnt leave anything out in bridging the stories and u let it take up from where the last one left of and u gave us views of n outsider at the scene that was perfection. I LOVED the way u set up his thoughts and I loved his perception and analyzing of the situation and kagome, at least she has one ally in the heel hole, I get the feeling this is going to be fic where they are not just going to dive back into bed together and there are going to be alot of problems beforehand and sesshoumaru is going to be possessive(please let him be possessive, but its simply a request). I like that and that way u will have a story on your hands without to much plot trouble and dont force the chapter the last story was exquisite, let this one roll of u the same way, naturally. I cant wait to read sesshoumaru's thoughts. I love the way u set up the first chapter and I also get the feeling that there is going to be alot of drama and I cant wait i am practically foaming at the mouth.
SQUEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!
Please update soon
Respect
Scarlet
I read it twice, just so i could have something to hold on to. sigh it was a great opening it was brilliantly done as u didnt let the readers miss a beat, poor kags i really imagine how she is feeling. i like souta as well, how old is he here? I love how u didnt leave anything out in bridging the stories and u let it take up from where the last one left of and u gave us views of n outsider at the scene that was perfection. I LOVED the way u set up his thoughts and I loved his perception and analyzing of the situation and kagome, at least she has one ally in the heel hole, I get the feeling this is going to be fic where they are not just going to dive back into bed together and there are going to be alot of problems beforehand and sesshoumaru is going to be possessive(please let him be possessive, but its simply a request). I like that and that way u will have a story on your hands without to much plot trouble and dont force the chapter the last story was exquisite, let this one roll of u the same way, naturally. I cant wait to read sesshoumaru's thoughts. I love the way u set up the first chapter and I also get the feeling that there is going to be alot of drama and I cant wait i am practically foaming at the mouth.
SQUEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!
Please update soon
Respect
Scarlet
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April 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have adored "In the Elevator" for quite some time and I am very pleased to find this. <3 I can't wait for your update. Keep it up!
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April 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
:o I cannot wait for another chapter. I loved the Elevator series. This must be epic.