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for Whats in your Locker?

by tintin23

schedule April 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a good story. Keep up the good work. Don't keep me in spence.
person GreekMeat
schedule April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice work...you have me wondering about a few things with this one. Not really sure where you are taking this story but it seems like a good one. Seems like Inuyasha and Sesshomaru are spoiled thugs.
Question though is the last name Takahashi or Tanaka, I was scratching my head about that one. It appears the brothers are hiding in their human form....looking forward to the future of this one
person kali
schedule April 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved the story so far. I'm really curious where you're going to take this :) Keep it up, I'm eagerly looking forward to a new chapter!
greets,
kali
person osherry
schedule April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh. So if A Grudging Loss inspired this, then I suppose it was the part when Kagome tells the press that she has to pay USC over $30,000 if she is oging ot continue with school. That subject is near and dear to my heart. I went to UCSB and paid my own way. I worked three jobs and had a lovely government grant. Trust me, you can do it (and be legal) if you REALLY have the desire.

Anyways, I'm so happy to hear that my story inspired yours. Yeah!

Now it's nice to see that Inu isn't going to make Kags a prostitute (at least not yet). I'm only hoping that he falls for her and treats her better... It sounds like Inu lets peopel borrow money rather than works as a PIMP. But maybe I haven't seen enough yet.

Sorry to hear about your laptop and not saving. (I almost lost a few chapters of AGL due to a hardware failure...) I own a Mac as well. I hit Command + S every 5 mins. I suggest doing the same. Also, get MS Word 2008 if you can, it is much more stable. I got my copy for $65 from Apple.com.

OK, keep writing! :-)
schedule April 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hmmmm, this story's got potential!
I'm liking it already.
schedule April 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great story please continue soon, i love the characters so far and i could just tell its going to get juicy.
schedule April 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a seriously damn good story. I'm enjoying it IMMENSELY. Inuyasha in the role of pervert just rocks my world, you have no idea. Anyway, hope to see an update soon!!! (Now if only I could get my ass updating a few stories...blarg...)
person evilpinatag
schedule April 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
damn this is good.
So inu lends money to people?
schedule April 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
my panties and my heart leap for joy with this fic so far. Please continue soon it is looking so good we all love a bad boy inuyasha.

person osherry
schedule April 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey, after your last review of A Grudging Loss you have to tell me if this is what was inspired...? You have to tell me...

Hummm...I like how it is going so far... The poor girl needs money and Inuyasha is willing to pay for...? Well, it would be nice to read a lovely lemon that results from her desperation... I only hope that Inu actually does fall for her. I'm a hopeless romantic at heart...

Oh and you have another little story that probably needs just one more chapter to be finished... Will you be updating that one soon?