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April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story cant wait till next update
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April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it keep it up!
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April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a new twist. I am eager to see what kind of trouble the 'beasts' get these two into. Great job writing, hope to see more soon
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April 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, I'll continue to support! It always sucks
when you start a story and don't receive much input.
Going through the chapter once, I didn't see any
grammatical errors. I thought it was lovely. You did
put 'irritate' instead of 'irritable'. Other than that
I think the story is coming along nicely. You should
add a little more description just because the plot
seems to be going a little too fast, but that's just
my personal opinion! I can't wait to see how Inuyasha
is going to react to all of this. Poor little guy. Well,
good luck and keep on truckin'!
when you start a story and don't receive much input.
Going through the chapter once, I didn't see any
grammatical errors. I thought it was lovely. You did
put 'irritate' instead of 'irritable'. Other than that
I think the story is coming along nicely. You should
add a little more description just because the plot
seems to be going a little too fast, but that's just
my personal opinion! I can't wait to see how Inuyasha
is going to react to all of this. Poor little guy. Well,
good luck and keep on truckin'!
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April 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just finished Chapter Two "The Change" and I
thought it was great! There are a few typing errors
but once you read through it again, you'll see 'em.
(Ex. "He as he found he") I love where this plot is
going also. I adore Kagome demoness stories (and I
think already mentioned that)! I can't wait to read
chapter three!
thought it was great! There are a few typing errors
but once you read through it again, you'll see 'em.
(Ex. "He as he found he") I love where this plot is
going also. I adore Kagome demoness stories (and I
think already mentioned that)! I can't wait to read
chapter three!
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April 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just finished chapter three and I loved the
comedy. I think Kagome's beast is cute, and I
have to admit that I've never read a story where
Kagome has her own beast. Still some grammatical
errors, but like I said before, I'm sure you'll
catch 'em. I'm also curious to see what Inuyasha
is going to do with this new (kinda) courtship. I
assume their going to get together because this is
a Sesshomaru/Kagome section. Meh. Well, continue on
with your story and good luck!
comedy. I think Kagome's beast is cute, and I
have to admit that I've never read a story where
Kagome has her own beast. Still some grammatical
errors, but like I said before, I'm sure you'll
catch 'em. I'm also curious to see what Inuyasha
is going to do with this new (kinda) courtship. I
assume their going to get together because this is
a Sesshomaru/Kagome section. Meh. Well, continue on
with your story and good luck!
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April 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I too like Kagome turns into a demoness stories. I
find them entertaining and fun. I think you have good
potential but here are a few suggestions. One, you should
lengthen your chapters. I know once you write something
you get excited and want the world to see, but people like
length and description. Second, correct grammar mistakes.
You have 'stair' instead of 'stare'. Third, use spaces between
paragraphs so your story is more esthetically pleasing. Just type
< p > together and you'll have it! I hope you continue your
story and good luck!
find them entertaining and fun. I think you have good
potential but here are a few suggestions. One, you should
lengthen your chapters. I know once you write something
you get excited and want the world to see, but people like
length and description. Second, correct grammar mistakes.
You have 'stair' instead of 'stare'. Third, use spaces between
paragraphs so your story is more esthetically pleasing. Just type
< p > together and you'll have it! I hope you continue your
story and good luck!
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April 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! i love the fics where Kagome becomes an inu demon ^_^ and now there is someone finally writing it well!! woot!! keep going update often for me?
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April 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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April 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is starting out really good. I would like to see more so please update soon! Keep up the good work.
Suniko
Suniko