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December 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry, I tried to read your story, but you have it so chopped up with the constant switch of pov that it's really too hard to read. May I suggest a re-write keeping it in one point of view? Perhaps a narrator's pov?
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June 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow keep up the great work im also greatful to whoever started the kagome turned demon anyways i hope you update soon ^_^
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May 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, I for one, like longer chapters. I think the story is going along fine. There are a few grammatical errors, have you thought of getting a beta reader? I think one would really help the story. All I will say is to be careful and not make the characters to OOC. I hate that!
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May 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story and as much as I love quick updates I find that I am left frustrated by the short chapters. I dont know about the rest but I'd be willing to wait a little longer to get more out of the chapters. Keep up the wonderful work, I can't wait to see where it goes.
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May 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I vote longer chapters... it took me like 5-10 minutes to read both of these.... but very good story so far
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May 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice story! The whole thing with Kagome turning demon may be old but also amusing!
One thing you should think about though; Don't change the POV so much, it's rather confusing and it breaks the readers concentration.
Update soon!
One thing you should think about though; Don't change the POV so much, it's rather confusing and it breaks the readers concentration.
Update soon!
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May 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ooo i like this story lots so far, i would rather shorter chapters that get here sooner but thats just me
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May 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good job. in all honesty i prefer longer chapters, but each writer to their own devices i say. i wish i could see what kags looks like as her demon self. pls if u have a pic let me know where to find it.keep up the good job.
Ja Ne,
Wolf
Ja Ne,
Wolf
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May 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i would love it if you have lots of chaps. short or long..tho i think i would prefer long...but the story is coming out well...maybe you so have a lemon dealing with sesshomaru and kagome in their true forms!!!! That would be awesome!!!!!
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April 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow...i...actually like this...hope to see an update soon!