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aaag, i have missed the story - it's good to see it still going! thanks for the sweet but short tease update =P
hope to see one soon but i shouldn't say anthing since i'm waaaaaaay behind on mu own updates, lool! but thanks for the update!!

so when are you going to update?

you know i've been missing this story like crazy. personally i like the build-up because i know in the end or when sparks begin to fly it will be worth it - so keep it up, at your own pace and thanks for the update!

I was pleasant surprised to see you updated UD - THANK YOU! I hope you update sooner than expected again. Mandisa is a trip, love her thoughts and reactions to things, lol! Thank you for the update!

I was more than HAPPY to see an update. It was great and hilarious! The thoughts running through these two's minds are just lol! Lack of better words!
Oooh, I hope a chappy comes up soon especially now Sesshoumaru is on the hun ;) Thanks for the update anyhow!

FINALLY!!!! YAY!!! I was so damn glad when I saw an update. A short update is better then none at all - I really really hope you will update more very very soon XD

Aaah so cruel - give me more! =p
Thanks for the updating though!

I really like what you have done with this story. The character main character has no clue on anything demon and you make the reader realise that they are learning of Sesshomaru. This allows you to explain him in your own terms as well as giving alot of detail and your own back story as well. I have given you 5 stars. I hope that you update soon.

I also came by because I wanted to inform you that Dominance is no longer a three part story now. It is now a 5 shot. So I wanted you to check it out as it moves along. I have also updated the ending of the first chapter as well as, I will be adding a new chapter today. So you might want to go back and read the last 7 or so chapters. Just look for the part when Sesshomaru ask rin what she wants and then that is all the new ending. Stay in touch and keep up the good work

With the Darkest Regards,
BlackMaiden

I agree with M.T.
I dont get why OC story dont have more readers or are more appreciated. For me OC are more fun to read because you dont sit and wait for "something typical of that character" to happen, you know? And as you said OC stories gives the writer a chance to put on an interesting spin, leave out an expected storyline - just like you did XD I hope you dont give up on your OC stories just because they are needed and yours are interesting,
so dont stop and thank you for Unexpected Discoveries, among others XD

Very good beginning ! I liked how you described her discovery of the past, what she thoughts, what she felt, and what Sesshoumaru saw and deduced of her... That's going to be interesting ! Stories with one of our favorite character and the other being an original one aren't always well appreciated (I suppose, because they don't get a lot of reviews, alas !), but I love them !
Thank you !

A french mother and reader,
Bonjour de la France !

Merely Truth