rate_review Reviews

Good story so far. I like how Rin reacts to Inuyasha. She is so dang cute.

AHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!! Sesshomaru's pic is really cool! It has the right feeling of dangerous and drop dead sexy! Kouga's was pretty hot too!

Wow, Kouga working with the cops?! That's a mindblower! He always had the bad boy thing going.

Leave it 2 a child 2 bring 2 people 2gether. But, my question is...had it really been so long since InuYasha had Seen Sesshomaru, that he didn't remember him right away? I guess now that they have been brought 2gether, I can hardly wait 4 the sparks 2 start flying again!

I wonder if they will start a fight at their first meeting. Or will little Rin insist on bring a stray home 2 play with!

BTW...This is a SessxInu story right? Will Sess b jumping InuYasha soon?

Great chapter and awesome drawings, I'm looking 4ward 2 reading the next chapter. As well as seeing the drawing of little Rin, in her little yellow dress. Is it modern style or a kimono?

B reading U!

Great job. I love the fact that you started off with excitement! And, I thought having Kouga save InuYasha from Bankostu was awesome. I have a sneaky feeling that the person that saved InuYasha was infact, Sesshomaru. But, I guess I'll find out soon enough!

I hope you post soon, til then...
B reading U!

BTW... The pic of InuYasha was very cool! But, I wasn't able to get Sesshomaru's to come up. It was just a blank white screen. An-T-way...

L8r!

At least Inuyasha has one friend so far that is willing to help him out. Now if you give us a little more of Inuyasha history that would be good. You have introduced us to a new player in the fic so now we need to know how he is conected to Inuyasha and his past. I know this is not my fic, but it just seems to me that as we meet new people that you could give a little history on them. Bounty hunters don't count unless they are really important to your story. Like Kouga, Sesshoumaru, Kagome and Naraku these are main characters. We need to know about these characters even if they are dead. It would give a better picture of what you are trying to relate to us.

This story is cool. I like it so far. Please keep writing.

This is a good start and I didn't see any grammatical problems.