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for Cherry Bomb

by Asphy

person Brittany
schedule April 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and cant wait for the next chapter. keep up the great work! :)
person Vyper
schedule April 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Cute so far. Like it. Sesshoumaru is too damn hot for his own good and mine. I have to quit letting him hit on women all the time on fanfiction. Hehehehehehehe
schedule April 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was down right the funniest thing I've ever heard. That might seem sad... but oh well! PLEASE update NOW!!! lol
schedule April 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! Need more...please!
person Vyper
schedule April 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Kagome, she is really in over her head.
person nuntia
schedule April 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The story is much better than the summary but I wish that the girls wouldn´t be so immature especially Kagome, she behaves too hyperactive and then awfully shy with all the blushing; more like a little teenager than an adult. Sango is rather annoying too. I like Kikyou though, she is more mature than the others.
Besides that it´s well written and your grammar/spelling is good which is not so common in fanfiction.
person rachel
schedule April 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i absolutely love this fic, u had drawn me in by the first chapt. i cant wait to read more.
person satterb
schedule April 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is such a great story. I love the characters, and I love the plot. It's so much fun, and so believable. Thanks for posting this, I can't wait for more!
person Mademoiselle
schedule April 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
xD Mature reaction Sessy. I cannot wait for the party chapter.
person thaupmustcomedown
schedule April 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
MORE, MORE, MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!