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for Cherry Bomb

by Asphy

person evilpinatag
schedule July 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
man kagura is such a floozy!
the sarcasm was great! so keep up the good work!
schedule July 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That has to be my favorite chapter yet!!! I love how Kagome remained so clam and collected and put Kagura in her place. I also like how she's not going to hold any serious grudge agaist Sesshomaru without letting him explain first. Adding Kouga at the end like that too was so wittly clever ;-) I can't wait to see what happens next.
schedule July 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've been perusing AFF for years and I must say that I totally LOVED your story! "We" always get so hung up on Inu/Kags, which I still adore, but I love how you developed all the characters in Cherry Bomb! *sighs thinking about Sesshomaru* yeah... he was totally HoTT in this one! Yay, for lemon/limes, lol!
schedule May 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE PLEASE? please, please, please....PRETTY PRETTY Please!! OMG I love this fic, so far. Sess/kag pairing are my favorite, and this is just Hot as hell, and if only sess, was real. *I'd have his kittens if he wanted to have kittens instead of pups. >.> *coughs* but ermm...yesh...Please continue. *waits like a child staring at all the ice cream flavors in baskin robins, for her turn to choose one*
person Tiramisu
schedule April 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!! Please write more!!
schedule April 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. <3 I hope you continue!
person Ladylara
schedule April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was great. I was kind of worried that he was going to lose it and hurt her by accident. I love the last part though. Very cute. Cant wait for more.
schedule April 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Finally I was able to review. Your story is great by the way. Its very different from all the rest. Great job. I really want to see where the story goes and what may arise. keep it up. update soon
schedule April 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another awesome chapter. I really do like how you have Kagome so relaxed around him and how attached Sesshomaru is becoming to her. I will, as always, be waiting for more.
person chiimurasaki
schedule April 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
its supposed to be orgasm, not organism.

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