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Arghhhh ! you're mean ! what's going to happen ??? I hope Sessh will sense her soon enough and help...
Please, HURRY !!!
Thanks

Dur, dur d'attendre !!!

Merely Truth

Hello ! I find your story very good, with a Sessh in character and Kitana very charming... (and strong !) I wanted to try the story because of the summary, but the yuri aspect wasn't very appealing for me. Now I understand it's only a passing time in the plot. Being french, I say that your english is well enough good, and I saw only three wrong written words ; I assure you that you can be proud with your work ! (In chapter 6, "Here your words, Sessh..." is surely "Hear...").
I like stories with OC ; do you know "I am the moon" on AFF ; read it !
Thank you for your story !

A french mother and reader,
Bonjour de la France !

Merely Truth

Kitana intended meal looks like it wants her for a midnight snack instead. I wondering if she will have her buffet or will the lake youkai have a bite to eat until a larger meal comes along? Can't wait to find out!!!

Hey!! Its me, your faithful beta!! Welcome welcome, good luck, and again, awesome work.

So when Kitana tortures and kills her prey to feed, she's torturing herself by subjecting her self to their memories and experiencing the horrible joy they have when they commit those henious acts. That's seriously disturbing to say the least! When she showed Sesshoumaru these images the way she sees them he learned that though he is a cold blooded bastard most of the time, he was a saint compared to those she killed. He actually experienced raping a little girl that remind him of Rin. The worst part was he experienced the joy the rapist felt when he violated the little girl. That's going to hunt him for the rest of his days just like Kitana is hunted by terrible memories. Really interesting chapters I look foward to the update!!!

Great battle scenes, they were extremely detailed! And I can't believe Sesshoumaru shot of his volcano in his pants just from spying on the two in the hotspring, LOL! I guess he is still a growing teenager. I thought he was going to join in on the fun, I bet a part of him wished he had! Again loved the battle scenes (I'm a major action movie fan). Look foward to an update!

This story is very interesting and is a creative crossover! The movie aliens gave me nightmares when I was younger, now it is one of my favorite sci fi movies. With Inuyasha being one of my favorite animes,I am vastly enjoying this story. I hope you decide to continue writhing it:-)