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wow. sorry about ur past. i know what it's like to suffer emotional abuse but not physical. i'm glad things r goin well with ur husband. i hope u do let hidemaru change. i like to give people a second chance n do believe people can change but only if THEY choose to change n it seems that he is willing to change. likin this story but hopin u give golden eyes n update every now n then. wishin u a good day.

LOL... blue balls...

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hey! u've got me curious what's goin 2 happen next. always happy to see an update. buh-bye.

Well let's see how this goes. Shippo was not the one who said anything about what his uncle had done to him and his cousin didn't mean to say it out loud, but what's done is done. I hope that Sess and Inu could see that Shippo and his cousin like each other and maybe after that first mating that they will be allowed to mate and take Sven with them. I'm sure that they (the boys) could help him find someone that he would be happy with.

Great chapter!

Ahhhh...the JOYS of pregnancy! I remember them well! I always saidthat my husband is a saint, because I was an EVIL pregnant woman!!!!

I'm glad that you included some of those oh so wondrous moments of expecting. Like the cravings for the strangest food! I don't know what it is, but when your pregnant the gross' stuff looks mouth-watering!!!!! A lot of people when doing reg. or m-pregs, forget to include some of those little things. But, there IS 1 thing that some authors do forget to include. You talk about the food, mood swings, over active sex drives, and weight gain. But, people tend to leave out the funniest and truest part of being pregnant...The almost unbearable GAS!!!! PREGNANT PEOPLE ARE KNOWN TO FART CANNON BALLS!!!!!! Inu being a dog, it should be included. Think of how funny it would be, to have Sesshomaru witness that particular joy and bonding experiance!

Off to the next chapter!
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The more I read about Choukichi, the more I like him! He does seem prefect for Shippo. Maybe Shippo could be with Choukichi, as well. Like a consort. You did write, that one could have several mates. I think Shipp, Fuu, and Choukichi would make an awesome trio! Good job with Sesshomaru. He displays the perfect amount of compassion, but still has his icy fasade. Nice balance.

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I know that people just don't change that quickly so there must be much more going on that Shippo dosen't know about. Will he give up on Inuyasha or is he just trying to makes Shippo think that he is? I see so much more happening and I think Shippo should tell someone soon. If he can't tell Inuyasha then he should tell his other uncle.

Not bad you have 200 hits with only two chapters out. I was hoping that you would show a little more of Shippo since he is the only left from the group that was with Inuyasha, well beside Kirara. While Shippo's uncle is thinking that Sesshoumaru is going to push Inuyasha away he should be more concerned about what Inuyasha will do when he finds out what he's been doing to him. I would prefer that Shippo was with them and then he could maybe mate his cousin. Don't get me wrong you can tell that Shippo is being held in high regard being the intented for Sess's favorite, but if you look at it this way Shippo was kind of Inuyasha's first pup/cub.

This is so great I'm loving it. Poor Shippo he needs go to a loving family. And he has no idea that someone is in love with him. Oh what is he too do with himself. Looks like Inuyasha and Shippo have a lot to deal with. please update soon enjoying this a great deal.

You forgot about little Kagome when you were describing the pups. It's this unusal for them to have another litter or is it because they are a special and unusal couple?