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for Of Gold and Adamant

by Vyper

person nchsmi
schedule April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It does seem that Fuu is getting a raw deal. I don't see why Shippo doesn't do what his father in law did, and marry his mates. Less confusion and no one gets hurt, cause they would all be equal!

Great chapter! B reading U!
person nchsmi
schedule April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG! U should do a book of poems! They r really good! Nice job on this chapter! I was wondering how Shippo was going 2 get out of being raped by his cousin. It's 2 bad though, I did like the kid in the beginning. I guess u should never judge a book by it's cover, huh? It was little funny, when I read how Sesshomaru made Choukichi cower a bit! Funny!

Great job, keep up the good work!

B reading U!
person nchsmi
schedule April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another sinfully sexy romp, between the Inu pair! Plus, they got an audiance 2 boot! I'm sure they will not leave poor injuried Thoren out 4 long.

And, what of Shippo? Did his cousin rape him, in frustation?!?!?!? I'm certainly looking 4ward 2 reading the next chapter!

Till then...

B reading U!
person nchsmi
schedule April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
One more thing, the poems at the beginning of each chapter r beautiful! R they yours, or did u borrow them?

B reading U!
schedule April 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I don't think its just lust. Sometimes it is just sex, but if you are with that one special person then it means so much more. At other times its a need to show what words can't express.
person nchsmi
schedule April 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yesssssssssss!!! Finally more funtime with Inu and Sess! I was wondering myself if Inu was regreting his life of leisure yet. I mean he WAS a strong warrior at one time!!! Great lemon, Great chapter, great story!

Till next time-

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person nchsmi
schedule April 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I still feel a little sorry 4 Choukichi. I can c, that he's still hung up on Shippo. I'm starting 2 think that little Fuu, will b getting the best out of this relationship. She won't have 2 b burdened with playing '3rd wheel' to Sven. Nice chapter, and as always...

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person nchsmi
schedule April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Damn, Shippo has turned out 2 b a vicious little snit, hasn't he? He sounds like a miniture old Sesshomaru! Poor Fuu, I kind of feel sorry 4 her. Isn't she Sesshomaru's favorite child? I wonder how he'd feel about his 'little' girl being snubbed 4 another. Even if it is a youkai tradition.

Great chapter, so far.

B reading U!
schedule April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This fic is just too cute, but you have to find some one for Shippo's cousin. I feel bad that he doesn't have anybody to love.
schedule April 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well at least his cousin has stopped chasing him. Sven is a calmer person for him I just hoe that it will work out that Sesshoumaru will allow Sven to mate with Shippo after the first mating. How long will it take for Thoren to give birth? I know he can only give birth ot one colt at a time, but you never said how long it would take.