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for Pride (In the Name of Love)

by jessimaxwell

schedule July 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Gah I forgot to mention previously...So help me if Toga dies I'll end up crying for weeks to come...which may not be good...considering I've got work tonight at a very public place. XD XD "What's wrong? Why are you crying? Is everything okay?" "*fully sincere tone of sorrow, breaking down into further sobs* TOGA DIED AGAIN!"
person Vyper
schedule July 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Toga cannot die now, it would be so wrong. Sesshoumaru will never recover if his Father dies.
person Vyper
schedule July 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Toga. I was hoping there was a way to fix Sesshoumaru. Poor guy is really messed up.
schedule July 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Holy jumping grasshoppers on LSD!!!!!! Normally, stories without end become tedious and, frankly, I end up rather wanting to shake the author, but this, this madness of yours -while having several stopping points- is much like reading an entire book series crammed into one go. I actually want to know where you go next, and I love that you have no clue at all, that is honestly the biggest reason I kept reading- you let the characters write themselves, not many are want to do that.

~Ann
schedule July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The evil mentally unstable dragon has some nerve! He basically said Sesshoumau was crazy. Granted I always thought Sesshoumaru had some major issues but compared to the dragon, he is a completely lucid, saint! Ugh, I can't stand that dragon! Well enough venting at a fictional character for now. Excellent chapter, I look forward to finding out what happens next!!!,
person Vyper
schedule July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Sesshoumaru. He has completely lost his mind and is such a sad mess. Stupid dracolich. I hope he dies and that the puppet master dies too. Bastards.
person Vyper
schedule July 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Naraku I hope gets on the good side so that they can take down those bastards. The poor Inu's need help and Sesshoumaru needs to escape. I really hate this dracolich. He is such a bastard. He makes Naraku look nice.
person Vyper
schedule July 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This chapter is so sad. I know in some ways how feeling like one is nothing feels. Poor Sesshoumaru.
schedule July 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*hugs!* Sorry, I'm only on chapter 85 right now, I've been too busy/sick to keep up with you. But, I wanted to do something for your 100th chapter. So, I pulled out the pen and pencil (it has been over 7 years since I've drawn anything, seriously, and about 5 since I stopped writing...stuff happened to make me stop both. I'm trying to get back into writing again, almost have a story ready to go that was based on the begining of this one with Sess dead and Inu taking over.) and do an attempt at something. I couldn't do the tattoos...not without any sort of reference to go by. Over the whole body it was just too much so I left it be. I didn't have a chance to do any shading either, so I left it as an attempt at a line drawing. I'm actually not happy with it, but it's the thought that counts, right?

Anyway, congrads on chapter 100! I will catch up at some point. http://museatory.netfirms.com/javagreen/nfpicturepro/displayimage.php?pid=53&fullsize=1 My attempt at a Sairex.
person Vyper
schedule July 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Sesshoumaru. I hope Toga and the others save him. This mind fuck has to end for the poor guy.

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