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for Pride (In the Name of Love)

by jessimaxwell

person 1127
schedule August 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just Love your story !!! And I love what you are doing with Naraku !!! It just fits. He has always been after InuYasha. Please !!! Keep up the great work. Can't wait to see your next set of twist and turn. Thanks for sharing.
person Vyper
schedule August 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is such a funny chapter. I love how Naraku torments Inuyasha.
person Vyper
schedule July 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Naraku is so cool in this fic. I love it! I also hope that Sess'a Mom gets what is coming to her.
schedule July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ugh! And I thought Naraku was horrible. I thought the raven woman who murdered Miroku and took his mate against his will was worse, hell I even thought the dragon was more terrible then them all put together, boy I was wrong! Sesshoumaru's 'Mother' makes all of the other villans look like good hearted boy and gil scouts. Can't wait to see the next chapter!!!
person tortirioan
schedule July 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ok... Am I the only person who would really like to see some Inuyasha/Kouga stuff in this fick, the Sesh and Father stuff is hot and all, but the incest thing is a little over played at least i feel, I would love to see a chapter or 2 where inuyasha and Kouga get it on (I realize that is hard at the moment with Kouga a baby and all but please?)
person Vyper
schedule July 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Kimi needs to die. What a bitch!
schedule July 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You are so cruel. I love it. Also, I am more than flattered that you carved the time out so you could update for me, when I saw that it made me blush like an idiot. I don't know why. *Sigh* But, I do suppose that everyone needs a break. Especially you, who has worked so diligently to update almost everyday. I hope you can get some well deserved rest on your break. I look forward to you next chapter in a few days.

*Star*
schedule July 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
....You.Are.So.Mean....But I can't help but love you anyways! ^^ I've been following this story from chapter six(?) I believe, and I just can't seem to get enough of it. Your so talented, it pains me to think that your going to make everyone wait until the end of the week for the next chapter. I really hope you find some way to update some time during the week. For me? And regarding what you said in the last chapters notes, I would be more than glad to contribute to your followers concerning Rurouni Kenshin story if you chose to make one. I'm also very happy with the length of this story and the quality as well, many people rush into things or tend to let the longer ones drone. You have done neither of these things, it is easy to tell if a writer cares about the piece they're writing and to me it would seem that you care both about the story it's self and the audience that it has drawn. I hope to see you continue this story for a long time to come. Your doing a fantastic job.

*Star*
person Vyper
schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sesshoumaru's Mom is back! Wow, I wonder how this is going to go and I hope Naraku doesn't get caught. I am hoping he will sneak out with the mokomoko just fine.
person Vyper
schedule July 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Naraku is being so damn cute, it makes it hard to not like him. I am suprised that Sesshoumaru did not have more anxiety at being taken again although Toga is good at causing him pleasure. Thank you for the update and will look forward to more.