rate_review Reviews

All right. I am so loving this. I know I don't review as often, but I am truly enjoying this story.

Wow... I just stumbled on this story a few days ago and read it all in a couple long evenings. This is quite the sprawling epic you have here. ;b For the most part it has been an enjoyable read. I love Sairex- he's a great OC- and I particularly enjoyed Kagome's future-science and the ways you use it to counter magic. There were a few other things I wanted to mention... but that was a couple dozen chapters ago so my brain has lost track of them; I'll see if I can dredge them back up to mention later.
Ah, there was one thing especially- you have managed to do something I had thought to be utterly impossible: make me like Naraku. Props on that!!
I'm looking forward to seeing where this all ends. =]

This is a great chapter. Sairex is so smart in capturing the dracolich.

Yay! I finally get to review on the site after how many chapters?? O_o lol Well yush. I like the story and the twists and turns it presents. I honestly thought Naraku was going to kill Kagome! xD And ow Kimi is all conflicted. Let Toga go, she dies...lies, somehow she will die...Not unless Sesshoumaru is convince otherwise. Ish waiting for next chappy and cannot to see Sairex again! Yay!!

~Liera Antionette

Hi, I think the story so far is great. I have been reading the whole story thou this is my first review. I have never read a story line like this before so it is refreshing. But I would like to make a few suggestions. I think Naraku should get back all his memories and powers, but he does not have to be evil again. Naraku was a powerful enemy and I love him with his funny side but he lacks what make Naraku a great character. I think if you gave him back his memory that he could be the northern land lord. Naraku would be the only person I can see in your story as of chapter 128 that could get the bandits to obey. Naraku could decide that being the northern lord and having the new somewhat friend he has gained more important than trying to be all powerful and getting his assed kicked by Toga when and if he is freed.

I also think that Sesshoumaru, Toga, and Kimi ( sorry if sp is wrong ) should be a family. I think when you are young you make mistake that are hard to undo. I think Kimi regrets what she did and really did love Toga and just did not realize it until he was gone. Plus not have the love of his mother according to your story line really mess Sesshoumura mental state up. I know they cannot be all lovey at once but demon do live a long time, so I think they have time to be a family. Also Sesshoumaura has to take care of Rin's needs too. She is not a little girl anymore.

Can not wait until next post. Nyko

Miroku is such a cute letch. I love it.

omg!!! I love Naraku...I love him sooo much he is so fucking funny whenever he's near Inuyasha!!*laughs* And Sesshy good job at taking your mother down a peg or two.*smiles*

I love this chapter. You keep coming up with things that make these chapters so interesting. You are a great writer.

Naraku saves the day again!!! And all of the gang has made there escape!!! The plot to this story has so many interesting twist and turns that I can't get enough!!! I look forward to the next chapter:-)

I just love this Naraku you have designed. He is like a Naraku/Jakotsu amalgamation, but somehow warm and squishy. I wanna glomp him!

Thanks for sharing with us!