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March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good they are going to save Sesshoumaru.......please save him Miroku and Inuyasha..........It is so sad to see the proud demon hottie be brought to his knees like this. It totally sucks. Oh and great story.....thanks for the update.
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March 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor, poor Sess.......Inuyasha has to find him and save his poor self........it is so dang sad.....
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March 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok that is it.......INUYASHA MUST SAVE SESSHOUMARU!!!!!!!! AHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! I mean it is simply horrible what is happening to him and as his brother Inuyasha must behave like a good little brother and RESCUE SESSHOUMARU!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHH! Which means I am traumatized........I ment Sess is traumatized.....oh hell.....I am a hopeless fan girl who loves Sesshoumaru.........SOMEONE SAVE SESSHOUMARU!!!!!!
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March 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow...i really don't know what else to say. you pulled out all the stops. i'm not much of a sesshoumaru fan, but even i feel for the guy now. excellent job of describing the emotional involvement of your character. great chapter, as usual.
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March 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter, and so soon,too. the interaction between rin and sesshoumaru was done very well. this is fast becoming a favorite of mine. thank you for posting it.
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March 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Inuyasha HAS TO SAVE SESSHOUMARU! AHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!! Ok sorry moment of anguish.......I will save Sesshoumaru......someone has to dang it all...ok I know it is a fan fic, but AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!! Ok keep writing.
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March 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What happened gives a great start to your story ! A mysterious and very dangerous foe, a poor beaten Sessh, a lovely Rin, and Miroku and Inuyasha, ready and free to help and act, good premices for a interesting adventure... I hope Inu will be a wonderful warrior and save his brother !!!
Thank you very much for your writing !
From a french mother and reader,
Bonjour de la France !
Merely Truth
Thank you very much for your writing !
From a french mother and reader,
Bonjour de la France !
Merely Truth
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March 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow, now the action starts. i was very impressed to read that you self-beta. with the quality of the writing, and the development of the plot, i would have guessed two or three good betas. just the fact that you used 'ken' correctly and not 'kin' impressed me. i hope you find the time to update frequently. i will be stalking the update section to keep track. thank you for all the work you've put into this.
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March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a good start. So far I haven't read a fic like this one.
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March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i really like this. it's a little hard to get the feeling of a story in just one chapter, but you have an easy to read writing style that made this first chapter very enjoyable. i appreciate the care and time that you took to work out all the little typos and errors that litter so many stories. i hope you continue this on a regular basis.