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for Pride (In the Name of Love)

by jessimaxwell

schedule March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I still want to cry for both of them now. I'm glad that Inuyasha has a way to save his brother. With this I'm hoping that they will become closer.
person Vyper
schedule March 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is so sad. I really hope Inuyasha saves Sesshoumaru. Poor broken man.......it is so wrong.
schedule March 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOW that was of corse A-MAZING ! The beginning of the chappy was good.... way to make Sess fess up to not only his brother but his last words to his father. Wow I am really looking forward to that talk that Inu wanted to have if they can ever get out of this. What would happen if Inu went to sleep in the forest and something captured him? I mean this whole black circle thing is still very intresting! More or less how big is that circle anyway? I have made my personal hint for today. Can't wait for more DRAMA. :) Who would have ever thought that three little words could rock someone's world...had been broken....WOW I am really speachless.
person Vyper
schedule March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I hope Inuyasha tessaiga's that bastard to hell and back. Poor Sesshoumaru......
schedule March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOW WHAT A RUSH.....I CRYED...I REALLY CRYED THAT HAS NEVER HAPPENED BEFORE I FEEL BAD BUT I NEVER CRY. THAT WAS THE BEST CHAPPY I THINK I HAVE EVER READ..........EVER!!!! I WANT MORE..... PLEASE KEEP WRITING. YOU KNOW MOST OF THE TIME I CAN FIGURE OUT HOW STORIES ARE GOING TO END BUT THIS TIME I REALLY DON"T HAVE A CLUE!!! OMG I CAN'T DESCRIBE HOW MUCH I LOVE THIS CHAPTER!!!! THIS WILL BE GETTING EAD OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER.....
schedule March 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That Was the S***!!!!!!!! Please keep writing..... be much more discriptive in the next scene though. The first torture scene was great but you have to go over the top on this one!!! I love Sess and everything but sometimes I like to see him hurt. I know this is just my inner gemini talking but anyway. Please don't down yourself.... this chappy was great!!! I love that you up date everyday, that is refreshing, most stories I read have been weeks or months!
person Vyper
schedule March 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love this story. I hope Sesshoumaru is rescued before that bastard gets his hands on him again to hurt him. I loved that part when Sess lost it. Poor, poor Sesshoumaru. His brother better hurry before it is too late.
schedule March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is so brutal yet so awesome!!! Can't wait to read more.
schedule March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
BEST STROY EVER PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i usually don't read stories that are sesshoumaru centric. this one is an exception, and it's all because of your writing. what else can i say?