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Ok I'm not opposed to Sess and Tai being together, but I just don't want Inu left out. A threesome would be awesome!!!!!!!!!!!

Lol.......ice cream...... That actually sounds pretty good. Thanks.

Oddly...I was eating a bowl of yummy mint chocolate ice cream (Hagen Dase...so tastey...so expensive x.x! good thing I only have ice cream about once every two months) as I read this chapter, lol. Keep going whereever the story takes you, it's all any writer can do. I'm looking forward to Rin's handeling of the Great Dog General and hopefully he can talk some sense into his son. I do think Sesshoumaru needs Rin around to bring out his soft side.

Eager as always for the next part <3

I sincerely hope that Tashio pushes for Sess to be with Inuyasha. It would be odd to have a son as a mate since that just feels wrong, but it is your story. I think Sesshoumaru needs Inuyasha's 'opposite's attract' personality. Just my two cents. Love the story still and apparantly I need a beta for mine. I don't normally use one though since my story is kind of like a wing it scenerio. If you are winging it you are doing awsome.

I don't know about Sess and Tai seems too freaky to me, but for the brothers to do it is fine. Don't ask me why I just think they are cute together. Maybe I just feel that Inuyasha ie being left out again because he's only half. I know that Sesshoumaru is the one in need right now, but Inuyasha has been in all his life and for their father to prefer Sess over him just because he knows him better won't help him get to know the son he gave his life for. It's almost like Tai is blaming Inu for being born just as Sess did. Neither one is well enough to protect the kingdom except Inuyasha and if he had the backing of his family he could pull this off until they were ready to take over. I see can see all three ruling together with Inuyasha being more like captain of the guard. I still like a Sess and Inu pairing only because Sess is an alpha through and through so is his father. Inuyasha is an alpha, but not as strong as the other two. I could maybe see the three of them together with Inu being a beta to the both full demon and Sess the occassional one to his father just when he feels he's becoming overwhelmed again.

Am I the only one who writes a book as a review?

I have been following your story and absolutely love it! The way you weave all the complex characters and their personalities together is wonderful. Nicely done thus far! :)

I hope Sesshoumaru will be ok. I also hope that the demons coming for him get what is coming to them the bastards. I am very glad Tashio is alive and well. He will take care of this nonsense with Inuaysha.

You left Inuyasha out of this chapter, but he needed a break. Ok I knew you were going to try to kill off Sesshoumaru with everything that he has been going through. Now that he is whole again it would be nice to have all three of them in the same room for a few days just as a family to bond. Tai has missed so much of his sons lives that he needs to play catch-up, Sesshoumaru has been hurt to the point of him trying to die to make up for the things he thinks are his fault and Inuyasha has been lost in the shuffle and is now the acting lord of the west. If Sesshoumaru was much too young to take on that role then Inuyasha is way in over his head. If they continue to use Inuyasha as a frontman so to speak then no one will know that Tai is back and Sess getting back to normal.

First - I know people always say sorry when they hear about something bad happening. So I won't say that not that I don't, but instead take all the time you need to get your world spinning in the right direction again. Though I am enjoying this fic it will never be more important than your real life. If writing will help you cope then do so, but not for us or to make us happy.

Second - It's aboput time Miroku didn't ask if someone would bear his child and he still "got some booty". It will take a lot of work for Sesshoumaru to get back to normal, but now that Inuyasha has some help running the kingdom and working on that brotherly bond won't be so hard. Sesshoumaru is still trying to impress his father I think by dressing the way he use to. I like the fact that you have added their father to the fic to help set things in motion. One question he doesn't plan on staying dead so how will this affect the west, the other kingdoms and who will head the family? Tai, for lack of better name, has already started doing things without thinking. Not saying it's bad, but a definate load off of his sons.

I am gald that Inu No Tashio is understanding of the two brother's relationship. I do hope that they become mates. It would be good for Sesshoumaru to know pleasure and love in such a way from someone he trusts. I also hope that Miroku and Sairex can bring Tashio back to life. I like calling him Tougaou or Touga because the writers of the series for Inuyasha thought of using that name for him, but stuck with just Inu No Tashio or Inu Pappa. I figured since they thought of the name why not use it? Still Tashio works.