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for Pride (In the Name of Love)

by jessimaxwell

person Vyper
schedule April 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love Sairex and Miroku's conversations with one another. They are so damn cute together. I am also glad it was Kouga who Inuyasha got and the inuendos were terrific. I still say that Inuyasha should be with Sesshoumaru too, but that is my opinion. Kouga is a good influence, but Inuyasha and Kouga as cute as they would be as lovers are too much alike. In fact I always thought those two should have been brothers. They are too funny together. Anyway kudos and all that since I love your story. I will keep reading as you keep on a writing.
schedule April 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lol, I think I would fear more of Sesshoumaru's gardening skills ^.^ I loved the pepsi scene in the last chapter, it was very cute.

I wonder how Sesshoumaru and Rin will react to having Kouga and his pack around? considering he was responsible for her first death. Bah, she's probably already forgiven him.
schedule April 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It was onething to hurt Sesshoumaru, but it was a whole other thing to hurt their father. I have forgotten about the guy that Sesshoumaru had clawed in the circle. Now it all makes sense as to who would spead rumors about him. I'm guessing that Inuyasha will being bringing Kagome back and if not then maybe Kouga. I kinda like Sesshoumaru with the new attitude about being open. The more time he spends with the others one on one, the more he seems to be coming back out of his shell.
person Vyper
schedule April 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter so far. Too bad that Tashio was injured. I think it is time Inuyasha kicked a little demon ass.
schedule April 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok I have my little two cents to put in. Here's the break down on who needs to be with Sesshoumaru right now. No this is not a coupling request. Rin and Tai are good for him, but not as good as Inuyasha. Rin will see that all he does is good no matter how he might "go all demon" she will still say its good. Tai has been babying him. Not that it's a bad thing because after everything he has been through he needs it. But Sesshoumaru doesn't want to be a disappointment to him. He already feels bad about "being a disgrace" to the family name. Inuyasha is the best person to spend most of his time with. Inuyasha wants to bond with him as brothers and it will allow Sesshoumaru to be himself or to explore who he really is. With Inuyasha he doesn't feel as if he has to prove himself. He will easily lose control when it comes to Inuyasha without him (yasha) even trying. He needs someone that will change from time to time to break him out of his self loathing.
person Vyper
schedule April 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I hope Sairex gets better. Poor guy, beat up by his own poison. I also hope that things will work out with whomever Sesshoumaru ends up with. I still think he would be best with Inuyasha, but this ins't my story. Inuyasha is amusing and I just think honestly he and Rin in a M/M story is like a no. I would like to see Inuyasha with Sesshoumaru, but if he ends up with Tashio so be it. He looks up to his Father, but fact is........well it is his Father. He like gave helped concieve him with the same sperm that he wants to use in other ways with his son, changed his diapers, that kind of thing. Being a Mom I know I would beat the living hell out of my husband if he did anything to my son like this. I am kind of waiting for Mom Inu to do so. Believe me Mom's can be pretty mean especially when it comes to their little ones no matter how old they are.
I can see her now "WHAT THE HELL DO YOU THINK YOU ARE DOING!", "Nothing that should concern.........", "THAT IS MY SON! YOU DIDN'T GO THROUGH NINE MONTHS OF CARRYING HIM IN YOUR WOMB WITH SEVEN HOURS OF LABOR ON TOP OF THAT FACT! GET YOUR DAMN HANDS OFF OF HIM BEFORE I CUT THEM OFF!" "But Mom............." "DON'T YOU BUT MOM ME SESSHOUMARU TASHIO! I GAVE BIRTH TO YOU! I CAN PUT YOU RIGHT BACK TOO!" "Mom that is so gross........." "DON'T YOU TALK BACK TO ME! (TAKES HIM OVER HER KNEE AND SPANKS THE HELL OUT OF HIM WHILE HE CRIES LIKE A BABY)" "Woman don't you tell me how I should raise my son........" "YOU CALL THAT RAISING HIM? I SHOULD HAVE YOU ARRESTED IF I DON'T KILL YOU FIRST YOU CHEATING PERVERTED BASTARD!" Anyway, it would end up with Tashio being beaten to death with some kind of kitchen object and since he doesn't hit women he would be totally screwed. Sesshoumaru would have to live with Mom because she knows what is best for him and Inuyasha would be brought to her house by force since he is too young to make decisions for himself since Stepmom also has a say so in his life. Rin, well she would be spoiled rotton, would not have done a damn thing wrong ever in Mommy Inu's eyes, and Sesshoumaru would be told he cannot be a Father to her because he is a bad influence plus he has to go through family counciling since his Father is considered a Pedophile since Sesshoumaru is at least 700 years younger then him plus he is apparently still a child to his Mom. So there it is.
schedule April 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awww, I'm glad Rin's back to help Sesshoumaru perk up again. Though, I'm a little nervous to see how he racts to all that sugar O.o; it could be dangerous to those around him.
person Vyper
schedule April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Rin, in for the shock of her life. Poor Inuyasha. There goes his heart. I still do hope that there is room for Inuyasha in all of this. Poor Sairex. He is injured and poor Miroku since he loves Sairex so damn much he would die without him. Love the chapters so far.
schedule April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can see both being shocked, but what will Inuyasha think about Sess kissing their dad? He was confused about his feelings for him, but seeing him kiss someone else well.....
schedule April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I’ve been reading and enjoying this fic for a while now ^.^ Each day when I come home from work I check to see if you’ve had a chance to update. I must say, don’t put your health at risk, if you’re not up to it don’t feel pressured to update just to keep your fans happy. I also must confess that I am quite partial to Sairex ^.^ and I am glad to see him continuing in the story.

Your last chapter did make me squirm a bit though, I’m not comfortable with Ses/daddy. But, write the story as you see it going ^.^

I am a new Sesshoumaru/Inuyasha fan which is odd as I confess incest usually does squick me a great deal. I’ve come to like that pairing, no idea why, I’m even trying to write a little Ses/Inu fic or four (since I have 4 ideas to start with), if my brain will let me. I gave up writing ages ago. I truly liked your idea of Seshoumaru’s fake death, and Inuyasha being forced to take control of the Western Lands. I was wondering if I can use that idea in my first attempt? Just starting off that Sesshoumaru was ‘dead’ and that Inuyasha would need to step up. The rest of the fic has no similarities to yours.

After this last chapter of yours I can see Inuyasha’s thoughts:

“Hmmm, Sesshoumaru is still fucked up, but he doesn’t want me to help him. He only wants Dad, probably because he still hates me and the only reason he hasn‘t been trying at kill me is ‘cause he‘s still scrambled. Wish I could’ve helped more, ‘cause I do love my brother, even when he was an ass…I miss the bastard. The old man will be taking over the Lording in a bit again since I’m not worthy and all that shit. No problem there, Feh. I’m not a fucking diplomat or ruler. All this political bullshit has been making me sick anyway. Wonder if he wants his sword back? It is his after all. Fuck, I lived without it for years before Kikyo nailed me to that tree. I’ll survive again. Kagome won’t be coming back, that’s fine, she’s better off where she is. An’ Miroku’s all happy with the bird. Glad for it, someone needs to keep that lecher in line. But I’ve no desire to be hangin’ around them. Geeze, I REALLY don’t want to be around when the Old Man finds out I sliced off Sesshoumaru’s arm either. Bet he’ll rip me a new one since he loves my brother best and all. Probably’ll go all yokai on me and not even care to know the reason. Not that it matters…always felt bad about that. The only good thing about that zombie-dragon bastard is that he gave Sesshoumaru his arm back. Maybe I should just leave the sword and go…not like I’m wanted or needed here anymore. Though if I do, some dumbass Demon Lord will want to kill me or make me their bitch to make a damn statement or something. Feh. Bring it on. I‘ll take ‘em down!”

Well, keep up the writing and I hope stuff works out for you on a personal level. *hugs!*