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May 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
so far i
m loving this story
m loving this story
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May 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. It has a well thought out plot and very well rounded characters that you make deal with the situations you put them in quite well and in such a way could almost see it as being how they would naturally react in the anime/manga. Love the raven demon, he's so cute, scary but cute. I look forward to reading more of this as you post it. Do you have any suggestions on stories to read? I seem to have run out of good ones atm and have started re-reading your work for something well written.
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May 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That little fox demon is going to be the death of someone I figured, but I didn't think litterally. Poor guards.
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May 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just... wow. Though your spelling and grammar is a bit questionable. The content is.. wow. Though, what in the hell are you thinking bringing Tsetsukosei back? *sigh. shakes head* Well, I suppose it would be a nice opportunity to test Tetsusaiga and Toukijin against his armor-hide dracolich ass. Though, still... Hopefully the next chapters will involve more Sesshoumaru and Taisho, in this womanly form. Smex is better but sex is good too.
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May 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
As for your beta-reader thought, I would volunteer. It's not like I'm doing anything else great or important right now anyway. The way I see it in my f'd up brain is that you'd write the next chapter, email it to some lucky beta before you go to sleep. They read and edit it for grammar and spelling and email it back to you for posting right after you get home from work. It would only be a one day break from posting initially. Then you could submit just a day behind. ...Just my crazy thoughts on the subject.
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May 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Shippo is down right dangerous once he gets his mind onto some grand scheme. Tashio would make a very enticing female for poor Sesshoumaru. I am suprised his hands are not all over her. Heaven knows Tashio should have fun with his new body for a while.
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May 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sneaky fox demon. That was too cute. Poor Toga. Anyway, another great chapter and I hope that the child is born a girl. I hope Sairex can save her too before that bitch absorbs her. If it is a boy I still hope Sairex can get to the child before it is too late.
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May 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another awsome chapter. Gratz! Anyway, I love this story it is great. Please keep writing.
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May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully written. I am a bit uneasy with Touga and Sesshoumaru together. However, at 13, Rin is not exactly acting how she should, even for an innocent girl. I like this plot not matter the outcome.... it has been extremely captivating.
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May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You know on the show 1000 ways to die two virgins died from a heart attack because they didn't have sex for 7 years. I can't imagine what poor Sess's body had to be going through with the pleasures both his brother and Tashio gave him. You know I can't call him Sess's Father now. It would mess up their relationship. He is still going to be killed by Sess's Mom. It will happen. You know this right?