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for Pride (In the Name of Love)

by jessimaxwell

person Vyper
schedule June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok dude this puppet master is really pissing me off. He needs to like die. Toga should have been able to kill him easily. Stupid barriers.......stupid bad dudes.
"Well if the old man would have brought me along I could have probably broke through the barrier."
'Well Inuyasha, sometimes people forget to think about all the details when they are mad. Did you tell him you could do that?'
"No."
'So what else are you hiding Inuyasha?'
"Nothing, I just forgot to mention that."
'Well next time perhaps all three of you should go and whack the hell out of these bastards.'
"Well, we kind of got a war too going on. Been a little busy ya know."
'True enough. Stupid bad guys. They must die.'
"Pointing out the obvious will solve nothing."
'Now you sound like your brother.'
"Oh Kami, kill me now."
person Vyper
schedule June 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sairex being half naked would make fighting difficult for anyone considering he is a hottie. Perhaps he should just stand around looking magnificent confusing the hell out of everyone and make them all beg. Miroku could do it too if he were there, dressed like Sairex, hmmmmm all hotties dressed like that.......yum. Cold shower time.
person Vyper
schedule June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I hope that Toga gets that bastard. It would be good to see the good guys get a break. Afterall, there is still a war brewing in the distance even if the 'puppet master' is dead. I also hope that dracolich dies too. Then there is Naraku to deal with. I think you have enough bad guys to start an all baddies guild.
"This Sesshoumaru will destroy all the evil bastards. There is only room for one......."
'How many times to I have to tell ya you are not evil and you can't be a bastard. Your parents were like married and shit.'
"You are wrong. I am a demon. Demons are essentually evil beings."
'Your a dork. Demons are fallen angels and you were like born. You had no control over your birth, nor did your Dad, nor did your Mom, I mean it was like a bizzilion years ago that the fall happened. So, you have learned a lot since then. I mean look at Rin and the fact you love me. Then again loving me could be considered evil.....I am married.'
"It was not a billion years ago..."
'How do you know? Were you like there? I don't think so.'
"No...I wasn't there, but you are still wrong."
'Just say I am right and I will quit arguing with you. Life is so much easier that way.'
"I will not subjegate myself thus. You will submit to me."
'I am like married dude. I don't even submit to my wolfy, do you really think I would submit to you?'
Sorry got off the subject. Sesshoumaru and I do this all the time so nevermind us.
"I still say you are wrong."
'Whatever........I am right.'
"Wrong."
'Right.'
schedule June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah, more confessions of love...beautiful. And as for Toga I get he's worried about his 'pup' but to ask the raven to send him to the circle by himself is a waste of his breath. Even if he did send him by himself Toga sons would have maimed him for doing just that!!! Anyway I am enjoying this hilarious, angst, drama filled epic tale so much!!! I look forward to the next chapter!!!
person Vyper
schedule June 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Inuyasha is such a tease with Sesshoumaru. I am glad though he is mating Kouga. They will make a cute couple.
schedule June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Everybody seems to have alot of issues to deal with, especially Sesshoumaru. Poor thing has been isolated most of his life (sighs). Anyway still hooked on this story!!! I love it and I look forward to an update!!!
schedule June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yes Sairex is such a sweet-heart, I love him to death and so does Miroku. But 'nuff of that we have a war on our hands and it is a needless one. The South is going to fight with the wrong nation, The Western Lands is not the enemy it is their own leader that they just "saved". But we do have a wildcard out there and that is Naraku....with his memory loss if Toga and the others can play their cards right then they could twist this into their favor, but they have to get to Naraku first.

person Vyper
schedule June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Dang, there had to be a war. Well.....we shall see how that goes. "I hate lower lifeforms...they will all die." 'Sesshoumaru you can't go around saying things like that in public. People will think you are a big meanie.' "Why? I am superior. They should all just bow down to me and accept what they are. A bunch of weeds wilting before the large oak tree standing erect in the forest towering over them all..." 'There you go again. I told you size doesn't matter.' "Hn...I wasn't talking about that this time although I am quite proud of my girth and length." 'Ya until it wilts like the weeds.' Sorry, have to run away now. Sesshoumaru threatened to show me it never wilts then make an example of me and I am married to a wolfy who doesn't share. He huff, puffs, but he doesn't blow. At least my mate doesn't refer to himself as an oak........I mean like ouch........ "You love me and you know it." 'Duh, I am just not suicidal enough to let you prove how much you love me. Married......not buried does not mean free for all.'
schedule June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sesshy me and you are so much alike, except for one fact you have your father as the center of your world I have no-one. Thanks for the update, but I must give you a spanking for skipping a days update.*smirks*
person Vyper
schedule June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I look forward to the next chapter. This was rather short, but good.