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i can't wait to see what happens next,my first love and i were parted when he was taken into state costody due to domestic problems.you can never realy know how painful somthing like that is until it happens to you, i was effected indirectly but seeing at 15 the young man i cared so much about suffer so was indescribsbly painful,.......and i always wondered about kagome's father but believed aksumi was strong enuogh emotionaly to kick any such loser to the deepest pits of hell please don't prolong the wait i know you must have an exiting fate for the kind of character i've never hated mor in my life.

Hummmmm, I bet her father is drinking again. She didn't tell everything about her father when Sessy asked. Interesting. I can't wait for more. I really do like your story. I check daily for updates, I hope I don't have to wait to long for the next one, even though it was worth the wait. No complaints except longer chapters! It's your story you seem to know what your doing. EXCELLENT! I can't wait for more, Write on!
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Fox Fire

The gifting scene where she recieved her gifts from her friends very wll written I almost cried myself and I think her and Shippous relationship is cute and sweet. I love your version of him.

real good so far hope to read more of thsi soon

ooooh, i hope you intend to update soon, the hint of abuse from the father will carry me over to the next chapter. I was wondering about 'the plan' which you mentioned in chapter three but you did not bring it up again. anayway... keep up the good work.

What happen to Inuyasha?

Great story, can't wait to see what is going on with Kagome and why she won't let Sess drive her home. Should be interesting.

Let me begin first by saying that I truly love your story. It is wonderful...moving at just the perfect pace. This recent chapter update has just added to the suspense of the story. I love the way you had Sess and Shippou present the gifts from everyone that meant something to her from the feudal era. The letter from Inuyasha made me cry. The reappearance of her father near the end and the hint of abuse of her and Souta...I can not wait to see how Sesshoumaru and Shippou handle this when they find out. Please keep up the great work and update soon.

OMG I just got done reading all of it for the first time today and I have to say you are doing a great job. I love how you make every thing so really. It is so sad with what is going on if Kagomes family. I think it is very cool that you are saying he just up and left the family and doing what most people do saying he die. I can't wait to see how every thing is going to be. here is hoping for more.

The groping part was really funny, and I'm dying to know what happened to kagome to change her behavior. Awesome story, I really like to read it. Can't wait for the next chapter. :)

just deleted a lot of questions pertaianing to the plot, somthing about shippo and an edipus complex and somthing along the lines of how sesshomaru has somthing hidden up his sleave (the right one)I wonder what he's hiding and what his "plan" is. ahh the sound of evil only our dear lord sesh could inspire. No procrastinating. C'mon you have us all intregued don't leave us hanging