rate_review Reviews

Nothing like coding a story to get views and most of the codes don't relate to it. Big thumbs down

It sounds like Inuyasha is becoming more like his brother without his knowing it. I understand that it's because he has lost everyone that he has ever cared about, but how will Sesshoumaru react to this?

okay... first coding? what does anon mean by that? starting a new story... and it seems u may be deviating from what u usually do. curious to see how this goes. seriously, coding? looking forward to next time.

Anon, I have no idea what you are talking about with coding a story. I read reviews that stated that people wanted a good Inuyasha and Sess fic. I just made this up last night. I don't understand your constistant negativity towards writers.
If you don't like the fic don't read it, it is that simple. I am free writing and this fic will have no F/M relationships in it. I don't write stories before entering them, I do this all off of my own imagination. This will be my first serious M/M fic. I like to challenge myself so whatever you are talking about it really beyond me. A big thumbs down to your review.

I think the 1st review is refering the fact that the way this is coded it doesn't let you know it's a work in progress. There is no WIP. The way the codes read it is a oneshot or two shot. If that is the case, most of the codes don't apply to it so far.

Ok I removed the codes cause they are stupid anyway. I figured I could use them all as I went along with this story, but the main point is this is supposed to be a love story between Sess and Inu with like lots of stuff like spanking, toys, bondage, and other stuff in it.
Of course since it is Inuyasha there will be violence, probably death of characters, it happens. After all, I killed a whole shitload of them at first and didn't do the coding crap for reviews. I just was covering all my basis since there will be oral sex and other really kinky stuff in here. I just started it so getting upset about the codes was rather silly.
Should have put WIP, but I don't think like that. After all it was only the first chapter and Anon you freaked over the first chapter? Come on now, you had to know that was the beginning of the story. If it was a one shot I would have put one shot in the codes. If it was a two shot I could have emphisized that. However, it was the first chapter and to go 'freak out' on it was silly. In fact for the next stories I write the only code I am using is Oneshot and I will write in the summery a bit of what might be going on.
Codes aren't for hits it supposed to be warnings, but hell since ya'll here no need to warn ya. You know what is written in this place and what peeps write so deal with the consequences. I can be quite the bitch in that too by leaving ya hanging to guess what is in the story rather then warn ya. Besides where is the fun in letting you know what is next if I can just suprise some of you or bore ya? It is much more fun that way.

Oooo. Some structural things could be worked on when writing the chapters but the idea behind this is interesting indeed! I'm anxious to know how this chapter pans out in the next! Good job :D


-DM

I like....itz very different than the usual Sess/Inu fic. I await the next chapter

Now didn't Sesshoumaru just get through telling Inuyasha not to run from his demon? And what does he do!!!!! I can't wait to see what will happen next. I am glad that Jaken is gone, he was annoying.

Interesting :)
I like the banter between the two fucked up inu's and laughed when Inuyasha "screamed like a woman".
Looking forward to reading more.