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What a GREAT story !! I really like how you are writing Inu and Sess. And I just love demon Sess. Please keep up-dating. Can't wait to see where you take this. And what is going to happen with Kouga. Poor guy really does sound love struck with Inu.

You update so fast, I LOVE YOU!!!! Especially since I can't seem to get enough of your totally wonderful, awesome, terrific, HOT, and fanfuckin'tastic story ;) Keep up the great work cuz I'm here to read it!!

still like it ....

both brothers are so stuuborn. sesshou is unable to look at his brother's perspective n inu-chan has irrational moments of a child. seems pretty accurate to me. looking forward to them getting along. i'm actually finishing this pain of a paper and i have a test tomorrow. not too worried about the test though. mebe i should be. i hate it when i do this. sorry for being like this. chao.

Sesshomaru big doofus neanderthal....

:D

Nice....but could you just expand the scenes a bit. More detail would be nice. I await the next chapter.

I will try to describe a bit more, but this is a lot of free writing so I am doing my best. I am a housewife so I have lots of time to write, but I have a billion other things I have to do too so forgive me if some chapters come slowly. I am also trying to do quality, not just quantity.
There will be more detailed lemons ahead, but I want to insure that the emotions are felt too since sex is only a part of the two brother's relationship. I want them to grow together and eventually accept each other completely with all the different parts of themselves since both brothers have alternate personalities practically living two different lives if you know what I mean. This is complicated and a new type of writing for me since I usually add some of my own characters to my stories. I want to mainly keep this one OC.
Thanks for all the reviews and I hope for more. I want everyone to know that I appreciate you coming to read and know that codes are warnings, but fact is if that is the only reason to read a good story than that is pretty sad. Unless it is a Oneshot/Complete fic just assume there will be more chapters written. It makes it easier for the writers to concentrate on the story rather than having to detail all the things that they want to put into it. I would indeed prefer to add kinky stuff without always having to give it away if you know what I mean. The warnings kind of give away the fun stuff that one wants to add and then there are no suprises for the audience.
Love you all and even my critics I appreciate you. I just hope that next time you will give me a chance before judging right away.

Too bad Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru can't get along with the other parts of each other. If Sesshoumaru could just see Inuyasha as he is as a human and see that the only thing that has changed about him is that he is stronger as a half demon then it would be good. For Inuyasha I think that Sesshoumaru changing just enough for him like he did for Rin then Inuyasha would see that life with Sess would be one of the best things that happened in his life.

nice

THIS STORY KICKS ASS!!! I love it!!!! Although I would like it if you did a chapter before where you started off to show the first time they were together, what happened the hot smex and how long before what happens in chapter one occurs, cuz it can't be too much later cuz Inu's still not showing. Anywho, love it, love it, love it and keep up the amazing work! Hope to see more very soon!! ;)