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please continue please continue please continue!!!

i like the idea of this story. i love the poetry at the beginning of each chapter. the chapters themselves seem a little rushed. i would like to read a little more emotional development and adjustment, especially where chapter 17 left off. something such as that has to make a huge difference in the relationship. it would be a great opportunity to explore the angsty side a little.

I agree the chapters are getting a bit rushed, but at the same time I am trying not to slow down too much, however, I am going to be doing so today since my husband is coming home from Korea. I need to spend some serious time with him so I will continue on, but probably not at the same pace. 7 chapters a day is pretty draining on the brainy. However I have started another chapter and I am working on it. The hardest part is the poetry and making it fit in with the chapters. I love doing it though. I wanted this fic to be rather special. Thanks for your support everyone and will keep writing. I am probably going to do about two chapters a day if I can so expect fast updating, but at a bit of a slower pace.

It was very messed up for a Japanese woman to talk like an Italian.
LOL

I like that the two Inu's are finally getting along better. Hopefully Kouga gets the hint and leaves Yasha alone now.

Well at least they had one boy, I should have known that Inuyasha couldn't have them any other way but his own.

i love this story!!! you have to finish it!!! pretty please?

I would like to see how things will turn out with Sess and Kouga being in the same room trying to pick out mates for their children.

Sure there ain't some rabbit geneology in there somewhere?

Go momma Inu! LOL

I love sess mom she is so cool can t wait for the next part

so much fun. i like the demon side of sesshou. n inu's nickname big lug to describe someone usually so graceful. i like. bye.