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BronxWench,

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I love it! SSSSSSOOOOO MUCHHHHHHH!!!!! Though I'm a late reader... hehehe... V(^-^')V

good story thank you!!!

I have yet to finish this fic and I'm not sure if I even will yet. Practically all of the characters are so out of character that it's not even funny! Ok well...it IS funny, but yeah. Your fic is hilarious simply because it's so absurd, but not in a bad way. I love it to pieces! The whole Sesshoumaru peeing on Inu Yasha had me falling out of my chair I was laughing so hard! Omg...I can't even breathe properly I'm busting up so much. *wipes tear from eye* Hhhaaaa I lurve yew. x3

Ok guys, that was the last chapter....if I go on it will just get drawn out and well.........I have to say a sequil is in order for such purposes. Tell me what you think.

I just sat and read this entire story. I liked that, you must have been busy because I was here a few days ago, and it wasn't here. I give you "a big thumbs up". Um the story code crap, I put up all the story codes for what I have planned at the first chapter, and then add more if they apply as I go. Don't worry about it. I guess I get the idea of say a person reading a fic and maybe it has for example BDSM, and the author didn't put it in and them getting upset, but it was a FIRST chapter. I dont know not much bothers me in stories except for rape and torture, and I was ok with the bit of rape in your story, it wasn't too bad, although I wish it hadn't happened, but it is your fic and it's we should all write what we like. I don't pay attention to much to codes for my own reading, so I never thought of them being there to get more reviews or readers.

I'd suggest just putting them at the beginning of each chapter, then no one can ever say that you didn't warn them. I just copy/paste the beginning codes for each story into a new chapter then add if needed, and no one's ever complained, so you could do that, or you could just write. I'd be happy to read a sequel regardless.

So it's complete, now I 'm disappointed (because I enjoyed it), but a sequel sounds cool. Inuyasha in a kimono sewing was funny (I don't mean it in a bad way, I just got a picture in my head of him sitting there humming quietly as he embroidered away), though I had him sewing in my new fic, but that was funny too.

I love Sesshoumaru's demon, I love when he talks more primitively. I always thought that when their demon or more feral animalistic behaviors came out they would either speak more primitively or would use what I call "Inu". Sessh's demon is adorable. I'd love to see them when their pups are a little older and they have more, but I love m/preg, preggers InuYasha is cute. I'd be more than happy to read any Sessh/Inu you put up though. I hope you come up with a sequel soon. *more thumbs up*

OMG this is such a great story. I'm so happy that I kept reading it and the updates are so great. thanks can't wait to read the squeal.

Ladytokyo

This was totally awesome!!!! NOW on to the sequel! Awesome!!!!
B reading U!

nice waff-e ending. :)

hey been awhile. i'm liking this story. u had to sell me on this one though. i like that sesshou is finally in sync with his demon. looking forward to the next update. til next time. ttyl!