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Great fic. You should keep writing this one.

Nice story and I like the ongoing play between Kagome and Yash before they even meet. So just keep up the good work and I am looking forward to more. Plus the next part has me curious what Kagome has planed for Yash at the bar. I'am thinking a whirl on the ploe but maybe the two should have in private and not in front of the whole bar because Yash might be the jealous type. Nice job and looking forward to more.

Great job and looking forward to the next part.

So the story has my attention and am curious how he two will play their game out. So just keep up the nice work and lets see what happens.