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for Under the Butterfly Moon

by Simone

person sugar0o
schedule March 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yes and no, yes it did answer that she was in the future as well, but i'm still kinda confused. I'll say that rin coming back, maybe chapter r2? she and her friend said that the shrine had looked abandoned' for some years, was Kagome caught in time in the well? is she now 25? is she timeless? you've still got me utterly hooked but i was just wondering b/c i really like this fic a lot! - r0o
schedule February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You are doing very well, deffinatly an angel i havent seen done befor. Itll be intresting to see what happens.
person sugar0o
schedule February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
okay so still hooked. wonderful job doing that. but i hafta say that as a reader Kagome's return is a bit confusing to me, did she come through the well too? and if so was it right after Rin? or was she at the shrine and saw what happened? i'm kinda confused. also is Kags years older as well, like 24? she didn't stay in the modern era this whole time? or was she in the past? stuck in the well? what happened i wonder....other then that i'm really still very interested in what you've got going here, and cant wait to see more! update soon! - r0o
person wudelfin
schedule February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lovely beginning, hope for more soon.
person sugar0o
schedule February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
and now you did it again >;\ update r0o wills you to do so *uses jedi mind trix on you* haha i loved this, though i hafta say i wonder what's going on! ^_^
person nuntia
schedule February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is so OOC for Sesshoumaru it´s scary. Please put a fair warning that the characters will be OOC; I hate to see him behave in such a way and don´t want to read such stories.
person sugar0o
schedule February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
im interested in seeing where you take this, where Kagome takes rin, my muse is hungry for what is to come, i hope we see more soon. - r0o