rate_review Reviews

Kara and Ai -- great new chapter. I could almost feel the stickiness from the heat and blood in the air. I think you did a fantastic job of portraying the turmoil Sesshy felt at not being able to stop Jak and save Rin while in the barrier. And the oppression of the seals weighing on them. I can't wait to read the next chapter and was so glad to see that you two had updated!

I like this story. It is real intense and well written. Please continue!!!

lmao! Wow, now things are popping!!!
This is just great!

One of the best stories, in my opinion, that I've read so far. This story is the reason I made an account. Can't wait for the next chapter :)

I don't know how to put into words...but this story his hilariously, deliciously hot! I'm not a huge yuri fan, but the Inuyasha turned girl and Kags action is hot! Seriously! I know when they get their freaks on she sees Inu and not Shaya, but still. Delish! Oh, and, Rin is a fool! I know she's pissed at Seashy, buy with a lover like that--not just damn, double damn! I sooo can't wait for the next update!

Great new chapter Ai.

I like the tension and the softer side of Kori/Kouga. I also really liked your portrayal of Kagome's angry/revenge streak and her determination to drive Inu/Shaya crazy. The introduction to Jak was pretty spot on as well, even if I tend to think of him more like FallenAngel's Shades of Grey Jak. I can't wait to read more. Keep up the great work!

Ja! Kat

I LOVE this story! I've been checking every day to see if you have posted new chapters yet. When is the next chapter coming out? PLEASE update soon! ITS AWESOME!

GOD you are the best that is the most sexy and hottest inuKagome Fic i have read.. inuyasha and kagome are so hot for me.. i would love to fuck them both :P

Oh My Gawd!
man that was exhilarating!
I'm soo into this story it's not even funny!
Hah! Ranma! lol

OOOHHHH!! Busted! That is so funny. It's awesome that you added in Ranma -- I guess I was expecting Ataru to show up any minute while you're in what's supposed to be an all-girls pool. I can not wait to see how he tries to explain this one away -- but you've shown that Kagome is not all oblivious and is starting to get the feeling something is not right -- especially when it comes to her feelings and feeling on him. :) You've kept the new chapters coming pretty frequently and I'm really great-ful. It's been killing the tedium at work in the afternoons to read such a great story.

Keep up the great work and keep those chappies coming!

Kat -- weyrdkat@msn.com