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Umm, you may want to put the e in front of the a in this sentence from chapter 1, & other places, because as is you have him finding Kagome being attacked by a large naked demon; He came upon a large bare demon attacking what looked to be a young priestess. Should be bear/animal instead of bare/naked. You only have it correct in 1 spot, everywhere else he's naked. Other than this & a few other minor goofs I liked it overall.

I love your story. I think it is great that you are putting a story in not just smut. I like that InuYasha and Sesshomaru are just little kids. Please keep up the great work.

I actually found this while I was checking disclaimers tonight on new stories and had to bookmark this so I could come back and read when I was finished.

You have a really great start with this :) There are a few spelling errors, but hell, I knew what you meant. The main two that I saw were Than when it should be Then and bare where it should be bear.

Enough of that stuff though. I really can't wait to see what you're going to do with this. I love InuTaisho/Kagome stories and there are so few of them...thanks for adding one for me to read!

Awweeoommeee. Just wishing the chapters were a little longer... but don't we always wish that?

please update this there are not enough papa inu/kag stories out there

Love it! Can't wait to see what happens
next! Update soon! Please and thank
you!

I am most certainly waiting for more!

Interesting start, I will look forward to your next chapter. I love to see Kagome with InuPapa so thanks for starting a new one, there are so few!

This is a very interesting story. I love Inutaisho and all the pairings I can see with him in it. I write many myself but anywhore. This is a well rounded beginning and it opens the story well for many possibilities. I cant wait for you to update. Promise to finish this story and keep it open and running on a regular basis because many people fail to do this. Five stars to you. Great job!