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for Heartless

by Karaumea

person LilyMoon
schedule April 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You know, you are a very cunning authoress. Yes, you are. Because of what you wrote at the and of S-android chapter 5, I had to read the 13 chapters of Heartless (which I had not read before) because I wanted to know what you meant! Fortunately,you are also a very good authoress and I love both S-android and Heartless. I hope you will update very soon!
person Alpine02
schedule March 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow..You are simply magnificent... I love it and I can't wait to see more. Thanks for giving me such a good read.. I am a huge fan of Ai so the 2 of you together on one story is just amazing..Hell Hath is just as good..
Yours Truly
Alpine
schedule March 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG...I can't wait for the next chapter. For both of your stories. My gosh. Way to put a fricken cliffy right there. Heart attack!
person Jacob
schedule March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, i've been waiting forever for you to update this forever...and you leave me with Inuyasha being subdued by someone other than Kagome? How could you? Oh well, this makes your fic even more intense. Is Keiko going to force Inuyasha ito fucking her? Because you cannot kill him off!whatever you do, don't kill Inuyasha off, or Kagome! This chapter was really great and I applaud you for the finesse of your style.
schedule March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hurry and do more...
person massiebutt87
schedule February 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this story is awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person sunset79
schedule February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
please update soon, it's killing me to know what would happen next...
person osherry
schedule February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is awesome and hot. I just wish Inuyasha would tell Kagome what was going on... Sigh... I can't believe your story doesn't have more reviews or hits. Well, I guess they just don't know what they are missing. Good luck with the IYFG voting. It should start soon! :-)
person osherry
schedule February 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Honestly, one of your best works. Not that I don't love the other stuff you've written, but this one just pulls at your heart strings and begs for a happy ending. And well, the sex scenes are really hot, too. Gotta love it!

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