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by Karaumea

schedule October 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I wanted to get through everything you posted before I reviewed, but I couldn't wait. I absolutely love it. At first, I wanted to hate Inuyasha, I wanted to punch him right in the nose. Always thinking of Kikyo, always pining for her... At least that is what I thought before this chapter. Now I wanna cry for the jerk lol. He has been through so much. And Keiko chick... Yeah... Well, she gets all that is coming to her. Anyways, I love it!!
schedule August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This looks like an amazing story. I can't wait to read it.
The only thing I'm disappointed with is that I'll have to stop when the chapters do.
D:

You can always update soon. <3.
You're a fantastic writer, and I just can't wait for what's going to happen next.
A job well done. <3.1971
schedule August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 10 brought out a wave of emotions in me that I couldn't stop. For some reason, it made me reflect on women throughout the centuries, and how they've been treating even till this day. It made me cry buckets.

I completely feel for Kagome. You've written this chapter so beautifully. It brings out a lot of emotion, a lot of raw untouched emotion, for me anyways.

A wonderful job! I hope you update soon. : ]
person kittykatneo
schedule July 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is an amazing story! I'm completely hooked Please update soon =3. Honestly one of the best Inu/Kag fan fiction I have ever read really pulls on the heart strings!
schedule July 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE!!! OMG you HAVE to update. I read all this and at first I was confused but after a while i was thinking that maybe kagome had forgotten because something in the feudal era had happened but damn... i never expected this! I love this story so much and i cant wait for an update!
person kc
schedule April 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is a very good story you totally threw me never would have guessed the amnesia thing, please finish it I lovei t
schedule April 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a good story. Keep up the good work. Don't keep in spence.
person kimiko
schedule April 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
aww, i love this chapter. inu and kags are finally reunited together. HAH keiko deserved that; how could ANYONE harm ANYONE'S baby? :[
anyhow, update soon!
person kimiko
schedule April 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
cliffy cliffy clifffyyyyy! >.<
anyways, love this chapter. glad things are cleared up now. :P
hope u update soon!

kimiko<3
person Heather
schedule April 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Kara. . .beautiful. I don't have a lot of time to write a long review, but I just finished what you posted here and S-Android, and your characterization is wonderful. The description sings and I was totally heartbroken for several chapters of your angst prose. It's moving. Keep up the great work~

Ja ne!

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