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March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is so very interesting. But in almost every chapter you leave a few words out and that can really throw someone off balance when reading. Keep up the good work and please update soon.
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March 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol come on! she has GOT to bathe lol
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March 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have jsut read what you have written all the way through for the first time and i loved it. Highly erotic, and your way of describing events and characters is very vivid. I am very much looking forward to reading more of your work.
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March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love your writing, and hope to see lots more!
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March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is very naughty...but I LOVE IT....Please continue...and even though it is purely smut...she still deserves to be taken as his mate.
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March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I read this whole story on my lunch break. While very different, I LOVE IT!!! It's way out of the norm for the types of stories I read, but I took a chance, and you have yourself a faithful reader. I didn't notice much in the way of spelling errors, but what I did notice were a few instances of grammatical errors. Nothing major, really just missing articles that english teachers kick your ass about. But, I still loved it.
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March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
impressionable mind my big ass, and how many "impressionable minds" have you ruined, lol definately not mine, it was so far gone before this fic, so this is just depraved food for the fodder, cocaine for my hopped up nerves. Oh and how depraved it is these last 2 chapters had me sweating, oh the way he displayed for her eyes and the nasty thoughts in his head the acts, its all so wrong and dirty and so fucking orgasm inducing. sigh Love your work and hope you keep the sinfulness cuming.
Respect
Scarlet
Respect
Scarlet
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March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Greatest piece of smut I have read in a long time. You can only read so much fluff.. Thanks for updating so quickly.
Thanks
Thanks
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March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Everytime I read it tit gets better and better. Your chapters are short but good. I`m not complaining!
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March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
o hello woman! dont you dare think the r0o is not reading b/c r0o wants to see where this is going and hot damn if i let you get away with not finishing it! loves it! *pounces you* raRr!