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for Twist of Reality

by ryotgurl19

schedule February 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was great! You have a real talent! The whole story seems to flow like you were writin down what really happened. I like it! Please continue.
schedule February 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay, Let me say this before I make another comment. I love your story, its really good and it has potental. Here is my request though. Please, please do not have kagome turn demon. Prolonging life is good, turning demon is just... I dont know... I wont say its bad, but I have yet to read a fic that after Kagome turned demon it was good after that point. It just seems to lose interest after that. But then again I'm just one opinon. But, its up to you what you want to do. But anyway, good fic I cant wait to read more.
schedule February 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I like the originality of it all. Update soon!
person Kula
schedule February 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for the next chapter.
schedule February 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story and wish for you to keep up with it, one thing though... Can you make your chapters longer??? Please, if not it's alright.
person tnew78
schedule January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just found this, but am loving it so far and SO look forward to an update to this. Sess and Kag's kiss was very well written. Made me feel like I was there. Was disappointed when I realized I wasn't. :-)
schedule January 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it. I think that your summary does not do your story justice. Update soon, I would like to read more!
schedule January 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hey no fair.. you stopped when it was getting really good... update soon. i want to know how sesshomaru is going to deal with his beast wanting kagome...
schedule January 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like what you are doing so far. I think a lemon now would be to fast. But I will wait patiently for you to update again. Thank you for updating so soon!
schedule January 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I want Sesshoumaru to take Kagome back to his pallace and bond a bit[on several levels ;)] Then He joins InuYasha and their group and let the mayhem begin. Thank you for updating so fast! Keep up the good work!