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for Twist of Reality

by ryotgurl19

person lillith
schedule June 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
really i never would have guessed that was like something out of a paranormal romance novel you know those smutty ones
person lara5170
schedule February 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I just discovered this story today & I'm pretty sure it was written a long time ago but I'm very glad that I've found it. I'm really enjoying myself & I look forward to reading more.
person lara5170
schedule February 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great lemon. I think it felt very realistic.
schedule August 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aw, that was a very sweet story. I thought things seemed a little
rushed at first BUT nonetheless, it was great! I loved the closure!
I was going to be really upset if Kagome seriously wasn't going to
remember Sesshomaru. I mean, all the love they had built for each
other gone!? And, I was curious if wishing back Kagome was a selfish
wish? I mean it was, but nothing happened. WHO KNOWS! Lol. Well,
continue on with your other stories and kudos to this one!
schedule June 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay, so this is my first review for the story *ashamed*
ANYWAYS, I really like the progression of the story so far... If I had to make one comment it would be on the slight OOC-ness of Kag/Sess (by that I mean how quickly they fell for each other) However I thought you explained it well... Okay so I guess it really isn't that much of a criticism since I just contradicted myself... ANYWAYS I do digress.

Good Job
SereneLies
schedule June 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOO KAGOME!!!! I had to comment... *sadness* but I am sooooo ready for the next chapter

Great Job
SereneLies

P.S. good job on the hot steamy stuff :D
schedule June 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my...well, that was very...er...depressing :(:(
*sniffle* anyways, I have enough faith in Sesshomaru and the woman that weilds the keyboard...
Onto the next chapter

SereneLies
schedule June 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I was so pleased with this story...
YOu ended it soooo well... ALthough I would like to see a Rin/Shippou pairing from you... that would be VERY interesting...
Anyways, thank you so much for posting this...IT was wonderful
person Reymond
schedule March 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've liked your nice little story ; you got a pretty good Sesshoumaru (as a character) here ! Hope you'll write again and again, for our pleasure !
Thank you,

A french mother and reader,
Bonjour de la France !

Merely Truth
schedule March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
you should do another chapter for this that has if she had a daughter or not and what ended up happening and just that. it would be great to know since i adore this story. you did a fantastic job.