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for collared

by tnew78

person Ivy
schedule February 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was excellent! I want to see what's going to happen when Inuyasha comes.
person Ivy
schedule February 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying your story ;-) You write their growing relationship beautifully. Can't wait for the next chapter!
schedule February 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So....I'm pretty much in love with this story. It's very detailed and immediately captures the reader's attention. I hope you continue with this soon! I can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work!
person snowbird
schedule January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
These four chapters have been scrumptious (that means deliciously sexy). He better make her his mate, though. He seems fascinated with her abdomen and he did say she was ripe. Does that mean she's pupped? I hope so. I like a pregnant Kagome and little Sess/Kag pups. haha.
schedule January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*fans self* oooooo... very steamy...i like it...
person lidia
schedule January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You write very well.
person puppydog
schedule January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was awsome! Keep going! Lovin it!
schedule January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lord talk bout an orgasm fic, I dont think cold shower will help any one, and as lovely as the smut is this fic has raised a million questions for me the most important one is what is Sesshoumaru's deal? Does he really care for her or is it that she is just his slave os the flesh. And I Believe with all my wicked heart the Kagome is knocked up and I think the old dog did on purpose. Keep up the smuty writing, and I cant wait to read more.

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person Ahya
schedule January 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Dear God was that hot. The perfect story to go to sleep to. I've hit the jack-pot tonight. Totally awesome job! -smiles lecherously- Ohhhh yeah. Sesshoumaru is so mine tonight.
person sugar0o
schedule January 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yanno i'm late to work and why i checked my emails and stuff is beyond me, i'm LATER to work now! hahah but its so worth it! that was hot! and i love it! the GMs are strong within you and r0o of coarse wants MORE. now that you've started you cant stop but omg that's fantastic, i wonder if he'll be using her against inu, or if he wants a babies momma, i love that he knows already that he'll have her, body, mind, and soul, its rather fantastic! the collar itself seemed as though it wasnt just meant for her submission but to register, even if her brain has not that she is in fact his and only his! r0o must say she enjoys this side of your writing! more please! - r0o