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by tnew78

person Reymond
schedule February 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good good good ! ! ! HOT again and again…
Dark fic ? Why, then, do I want a beautifully happy end for this story ??? And I want it truly ! Please, don’t be mean……. mmm ?

A bientôt
Merely Truth
schedule February 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Was Inu Yasha there the whole time? OMG! Please update soon!!!! Yeah, I noticed it wasn't very happy and fluffy, but that wouldn't work for this fic either, so keep it going the way it is. It is an excellent fic.
person Ivy
schedule February 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think your story is amazing! Its lame that people are criticizing it...there are so many fics to choose from, why read one that you don't like? So I take it Sesshomaru just made Kagome his mate? I was kind of suprised Inuyasha didn't fight harder or Kagome didn't try to get away. Anyways, glad that you updated so fast and can't wait for the next chapter ;-)
schedule February 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG OMG LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!! I'm not usually into dark fics but this one has me so into it it's not even funny!

You're an amazing writer, and you are fully capable to displaying all facets to this relationship!
Keep up the good work. I can't wait to read more....please update soon!

YW
schedule February 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm pretty sure people who complain about this story being dark are just hypocrites; they're reading porn on an adult site but then protest if it's not happy and ends in marriage; that's BS. They're just repressed and feeling guilty about what they like. Ignore them and keep writing this hot smut!! Great work!
person sugar0o
schedule February 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
he's a violent puppy isnt he, though i can understand puppies do tend to get pissy when another wants their toy, though i hafta tell you i'm s0o0o0owondering what's gunna happen next, there's some kinky part of me that kinda hopes he mounts her in front of inuyasha ;p but then i'm kinda evil so yeah >;]
schedule February 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
holy shit that was a cliffy, and another sorching chapter, what did he inscribe on Kagome's back, and inuyasha is coming oh my, part of me just wants him to take her and run not necessarily them being together but i just want kagome safe, and although she is somewhat safe with the hottie demon lord she is still a prisoner and he has corrupted and brainwashed her to an extent to let her rely on him totally for everything. And the other part wants her to stay blissfully ignorant with her demon lord. GAHHH!!! I hope u update soon.

schedule February 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
As always I loved it! I can't wait for more! I wonder what is going to happen between the two half-brothers!
Im so excited!

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE
update soon!

person kikyoslovergirl
schedule February 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh oh oh stupid inuyasha always interupting things. grrrr..
person puppydog
schedule February 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sweet! Keep going!