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schedule January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is great so far, and definitely original! >.< I love the intensity already and can't wait to see where you take it. Great work!
schedule January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
HARMONY-SAMA!!! *TACKLES YOU AND CRIES HYSTERICALLY!* WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! *HUGS YOU* Omg, I'm so glad you're okay!!! How's life?! How's life!? HOW IN THE WORLD IS LIFE?!?!?!?!?!?! *HUGS YOU*

Omg...Seriously, back to the story, lol! I love it so far! A Harmony original? Of course I'm going to LOVE it! Keep up the great work! Welcome back!!!

OMG! WELCOME BACK!!! *latches onto you* lol! Seriously, you were missed, girl!!!
schedule January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I know stress isn't a good thing, but please update soon. Wow... I am waiting to see his response and hers after that little outburst. This is really a different idea.
person L0VER
schedule January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
aha,i love how you're expecting reviews from us, but anyway! first, i want to saw WOW. your plot/ summary really surprised me.. i don't know what to say. i can't wait to find out what's going to happen. very original, and only you can pull that off :P, second. the song was perfect the situation, yep. perfect. and hmmm, what's stil nagging at me is the world war II thing! :S aiyyaa. i dont know how to explain it but i just want to find out! :) great start.
person rebroars
schedule January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am definitely excited to see where this story is going to go. Great potential! I love the song too in the chapter too. I can't wait to see how they interact in future chapters. Good to hear you're not getting to stressed with the pregnancy, I know that feeling. Pregnancy with my son was the worst.
schedule January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have to be honest, I came into readin this fic with not much expectation but it captured my attention and I found myself hopeing there was a second chapter posted. I can't wait to read more.

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