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I like it so far. Just as an FYI there is no such word as thrusted, the past tense of thrust is thrust, so only thrust & thrusting as correct.

This was so awesome! I wish you could put this up FF.net so I could keep up with the updates! I look forward to more!

Wow! Yay! You've started updating again. It's good to hear everything is going good. Tell you sister to update soon too. LOL I finally got to read the entire Twilight series over spring break. (It was nasty weather when my son wasn't sick, so I had plenty of time.)

Anyway, great update and please update again soon. I know something big is going to happen, and I want to find out what you have in mind soon.

more more more more more!!!!!!!!!!

Good so far. Can't wait to read more.

First Congrats on the baby. Second I Love love love this story. I even had a few tears welling at the end. I can't wait to read more. I have no idea why someone would write a bad review, some people just don't know a good story when they read it.

This story sounds like it could be really intriguing. I hope to see more. Thanks

OMG WELCOME BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You were so totally missed, hon! Now, CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR NEW BABY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm totally happy you had a healthy and safe delivery! I'm sorry your family is having issues right now...I promise to keep them in my prayers. I'm just so glad you're back! It's been D-E-A-D around here lately! Like, not even Selina has made an appearance in a little while, so I'm hoping all is well with her! As for your story...

Omg, YAY and update! This is seriously a hot peice of work! Can't wait to see you around here more often and congrats on the new baby once more!!!

DAMN!!! I love it already!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Another songfic...but it's not bad so far. Hardly revolutionary. You seem a bit full of yourself, but so do a lot of people. And expecting reviews from people? Huh.