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October 15, 2017 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. I couldn't stop reading, and can't wait to read more.
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July 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Finish! Finish!! i love reading,please update
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October 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Harmony --
Great job with this chapter, switching from Inuyasha and his reflections to Kagome's big news. I like the tension and the music tie ins. I'm also in love with your grammar and formatting. So many have horrible times with both, and the fact that I can read this, and it's good is just SUPER AWESOME!
Great job with this chapter, switching from Inuyasha and his reflections to Kagome's big news. I like the tension and the music tie ins. I'm also in love with your grammar and formatting. So many have horrible times with both, and the fact that I can read this, and it's good is just SUPER AWESOME!
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September 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think, that this story blew in the beginning because you were jumping from one thing to the next so quickly, and how everything kept changing(character wise like inuyasha acting all lovey dovey I missed you so much I'm sorry we lost our baby, and then all of a sudden he's a complete cheating dick asshole that doesn't seem to care). But it has gotton much better, the chapters are kinda short(but even I'm guilty of that) but they are interesting and the plot is staying the same right now so keep going, I'm sure you'll only make it better :).
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August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
interesting story... like it so far... seems that kagome and inuyasha have a lot of issues to settle... and kagome is trying to deal with inuyasha's past... what will kagome do now?... maybe kagome does need to go away for a while and think... then she'll be able to handle all the news more clearly... sad though that she lost the baby - why didn't inuyasha meet her at the well when it closed? - then she wouldn't have miscarried... wonder what's gonna happen next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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August 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a very well writen story cant wait to see what happens next.
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August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This looks good.
REALLY GOOD.
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REALLY GOOD.
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August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Seven was quite interesting. I'm glad
you updated! I think it's kind of strange that he
knew she had a miscarriage before and then earlier
in the story, he implied she had an aboration. I
don't know. Keep up the good work though! I'm
severly enjoying it.
you updated! I think it's kind of strange that he
knew she had a miscarriage before and then earlier
in the story, he implied she had an aboration. I
don't know. Keep up the good work though! I'm
severly enjoying it.
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July 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really, really like your story so far. I actually
don't read allot of Kagome and Inuyasha stories, but
this one is nice. I can tell you went on a Memoirs of
a Geshia trip when writing this tale too. In a good
way! I dare say I love that book and movie. Do please
continue on and good luck!
don't read allot of Kagome and Inuyasha stories, but
this one is nice. I can tell you went on a Memoirs of
a Geshia trip when writing this tale too. In a good
way! I dare say I love that book and movie. Do please
continue on and good luck!
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July 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh crap. oh crap. oh cRAP. Im dying of tension here!!! Who was he a descendant of? Naraku? Oh Goshes...maybe Kouga? Oh wow, please update soon! By the way, the song was great, so I believe I'm going to check it out.