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for Playing with Fire

by Simone

person Reymond
schedule February 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Your OC character is interesting, and I liked this third chapter (the others were a little short...). Will you put a court in Sessh castle ? Some jealous ladies...? Or a beautiful general much gentle with her ??? Mmmmm... I wait to see !
Thank you for your story !

A french mother and reader,
Bonjour de la France !

Merely Truth

person Aurizan
schedule January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good start, short and consistent - will be looking out for more!