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for When She Comes Back...

by Karaumea

schedule February 9, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I loved this and I'm saving it to a special bookmark on my browser since I can't save it on the site. You did an amazing job!

schedule December 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I never realized I didn't review this. I'm a big fan of your work; huge understatement! I love this story. It ties up the manga beautifully and I personally think it captures Inuyasha's personality to a T. Spot on. The part that makes me laugh the hardest is when he thinks, "The fact that he was a half-demon didn't mean that he had to live on the tops of trees like a fucking bird, dammit!" Lol, still cracks me up. Maybe that's b/c I can see him as a glaring Inuyasha-chibi-pigeon squatting up in a tree canopy... (^_^) I just love this story so much! I love how you see his feelings and longing for her progress throughout and to the end. And what a perfectly sweet and kick butt ending, too.
XOXO,
Your Devoted Follower

P.S. Hail to the betas!
schedule July 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
A truly touching fiction. I do like you tactfulness in his dreams and fantasies in never giving a full lemon until she was actually there. Excellent strategy. This was exactly the type of fic I've been looking for.

~Firefly
schedule May 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Brilliant! Beautiful! Sweet and wonderful and lovely!
schedule April 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!! Omg, this was SOOOO cute!!! X3 This made me cry a little too! The Inuyasha groping Miroku made me LMAO so hard! XD I loved it! And I LOOOOVED the end of the manga! T_T If only they'd ended the anime the same way. Great job, one of my fave authors!
person Alpine02
schedule March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was a truly great story... I really loved it.. Thanks for writing it...
schedule January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved this. Very long oneshot, but worth the read for sure. I was feeling pretty bad for him when all of those fantasies were torturing him, but it only made the end that much sweeter, ne? :o) Great job - I will definitely be reading more of your work if you post it here! ^_~
schedule January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Reviewed story on fanfic but just have to do it on here too..since I just reread it. Just love it. It was so great to write it from Inu's POV. The dreams were great and I so very much liked when Kagome came back. It was so sweet and hot. What a great finish with Kagomes being pregnant at the end and Inu's reaction.
schedule January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wowee. gotta say, i likee. and i think it helped that Ai Kisugi helped you with the references; she's gotta be one of my favorite authors.
this was veryveryveryveryveryveryVERY good.
person osherry
schedule January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah! Great! You have your story in the right spot now! Well, this story is just plain hot and just what the doctor ordered after reading Inuyasha Manga Ch 558! Lovely, lovely!! The lemons in this story were so clever!