rate_review Reviews

OMG she miscarried, oh god poor kagome. Update.

I really liked this story but i must tell you that i think that chapter 2 moved WAY to fast, its like you jumped from one bit to another, chapter 2, had what could have been 3 smaller chapters in it. Anyway, i think also that it wasnt well expanded why Kags was a bit upset, or why Sess was so mad at her, really she's preggy, they are crazy. so really he's at fault for being so mean to her. anyway! love this!