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April 18, 2021 at 12:00 AM
I think it’s safe to say that this story will never be finished. It’s been 12 years since it’s been last updated, and the author has forgotten about it.
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July 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon?
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May 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
there's more right???? RIGHT???
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January 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow that was awsome i love it .. please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now
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November 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
uh man just when it was getting good please please please please please please please update soon cant wait to read more
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September 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
cliffhanger in a serious way!! finish the story, it is great so far!!! (and more smut; need to see more smut, and put koga in here somewhere!!)
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February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Can you finish the the story "A Broken Soul" please finish this story?
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February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Omg please update. I have to know what happens next. Your story is awesome!!!!!!
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February 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
God, you´re moving awfully fast and you jump from on drama to the next. It´s like a dreaded soap opera. I can´t stand your Kagome, such an immature girl. Everyone is behaving just unreasonably, I can´t take you as a serious author. Everything bad that could happen to someone you packed into five months of Kagomes live. And stop posting complete songs, you´re on AFF and no one wants to read the full length. A few lines are OK but not everything.
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January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You have a really good story! The only thing that bothers me though is the fact that your song lyrics take up soooooo much space. To be quite honest, I don't even read the song lyrics. I just scroll right over them to get to the talking. Maybe you could consider not putting so many lyrics into one chapter and/or not putting them in there at all?