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Poor Sess, he just can't believe things will be different with Kagome. Interesting you chose "constrict" for his subjugation command. I have see that one used in at least two others fics before where he was a slave. Thanks and update soon!

I like this story so far and I like your writing style. Keep going :)

I love your story. It is so sad at Sesshomaru had a bad life before Kagome came into his life. I hoping that Kagome with get him to open up to her soon. Hoping for more

Wow. Now that there is a little more to the story, I think I am starting to get into it. Update soon. I want to know what Kagome is going to do with this very scared Sesshomaru. LOL Good story.

I love your story. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Holding a story hostage for reviews is not the way to go about things. I also believe it is against site rules to do so. There is a term for things like this, it's called review whoring and is not right. Yes, reviews are wonderful but getting them when you earn them is much nicer than demanding them by holding a story hostage.

On another note, look at your first paragraph... Look how many sentances start with the word he. Though there is potential for this to be a great story, but the chapters need to be longer and more detailed, it needs work and polish. It is my suggestion that you look for a beta. They can help you with such issues and give you hints on how to improve your writing skills.

Hey just so you know that I do LOVE your story and would like an update, I am reviewing again. So.... Update soon!!!

I can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon! Please and thank you!!

Great start to your story. I think it is sad at the life sesshomaru has had, I hope Kagome will make his life better. Hoping for more.

OHHHH! I like it already! Please update more!!!! With longer chapters! I will be looking for an update soon!!!!!