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March 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful. Love It. Can't Wait For Next Chapter. UPDATE SOON! GAMBATTE NE:D
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January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This almost looks to be heading in the direction of a Kagome/Silver pairing instead of Kagome/Sesshomaru. Is that your plan or is the story just taking a detour that way before Sess is back in the picture? Thanks!
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January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i cant help but feel this story is kinda off balanced. You have kags as a slave owner that still acts like one, and yet at the same time she supposedly hates it. If his collar keeps hurting him when he speaks, why has she not ordered the collar to allow him to speak or simply get him a new one and get rid of the other, why cant they just be cut or melted with her own powers. Beyond this, its kinda weird that you would have them all so wild yet tamed at the same time, i mean really, one enraged daiyoukai could take out a whole village full of people. and i cant think that sess would easily be able tot ake over land having been a slave all of his life but the first "10 human-like" years of them. i dunno it seems a bit far fetched, not unbelievable but the story seems to be lacking things to cement this as a viable possibility.
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January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good chapters. It feels strange to have Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha and their relatives have English names. If you want japenese names try 20000-names.com you can find names and meanings from around the world. I hope this helps!
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January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That is so sad about InuYasha. But I happy that Sesshomaru got to free him. I hope Sesshomaru will still be happy with Kagome. Great story please keep up the great work.
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January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy that Sesshomaru is going to give Kagome a chance. I hope that when Arrow go's to get Sesshomaru he wont hert Kagome. Love that story. Please keep up the great work
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January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Gran trabajo, me encanta tu historia.(Great job, I love your story)
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January 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
update soon
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January 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
As I am happy you updated. I do wosh you would continue woth the story. I feelf like Kagome is very OOC. She would never be that mean or cause pain on another even if they were a slave. I can't wait for the part where Kagome heals of treats Sesshoumaru to something and gains a little of his trust, or at least curiosity.
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January 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am happy you updated! And I must say I am happy to see your humility. You really are a good author. I do agree with Danyealle that you might want to get a beta. I hope you update soon! This is a GREAT story!!!