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for Tales Of A Youkai Frat House

by ShouraiChan

schedule January 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, girlie!! I'm uber-anxious to see what happens now...I have a strange feeling Rin isn't going to make it through the night, though I could be wrong. InuYasha is still evil, but yes, I'd still do him. XD You crack me up! Can't wait for the next chapter!!

Ugh...have you listened to the verbal Captcha? It sounds like Satan talking on my laptop!! EWW!! Begone!!
person osherry
schedule January 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh no, poor Rin! And Inuyasha is going to continue being a murderer? Oh no, I can't watch! Go get him Kagome! Subjugate him with those prayer beads please! Save Rin and beat the crap out of Inuyasha! Erk! A rapist and a murderer! Sheesh, no redeeming qualities whatsoever. I hope that he changes over the course of your story...and gets his comeuppance...
schedule January 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon. I am starting to really get a feel of the story now. LOL I must say I am curious as to what you have planned.
person osherry
schedule January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear. This is dark. Really dark. Inuyasha seems to have no redeeming qualities whatsoever. He just murdered someone. (Can he be a heartbreaker rather than a murderer?) That scene seemed more like Sesshomaru than Inuyasha to me. Um...can you please make Inuyasha redeemable...? I hope he gets hooked on Kagome and gets some just desserts. (Is it too much to hope for love?) Why do I think you're going to use rohypnol in this story? I can't think of any other way for Kagome to allow herself to be raped...

Please make Inuyasha and Miroku into decent people. Please!!

Other than that, you have a unique take on the 'Inuyasha Gang' in college story. And I loved the back story about the miko who fried off his ears. I'm guessing it was Kikyo. And I hope Kagome manages to throw some rosary beads on him if he's going to try to take advantage of her. And what's with the box? More later...
person osherry
schedule January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OK. I've been thinking about your story and I came up with a few ideas. Take 'em or toss 'em. So when Inuyasha tries to take Kagome as a sacrifice (which I assumes means rape and murder) she throws the rosary on him. Not only will she 'sit' him to death (which will totally destroy his canopy bed)--but the rosary will also have another special attribute. Since he was going to rape her she'll put an 'extra' spell on the beads which will make it that little Inu won't work anymore. He'll try to get someone else to remove the beads, but only the miko who put them on can remove them. He can't kill her because that will also mean that he'll never have sex again for the rest of his unnatural lifespan. I think it will be even better if he finds the side effect of the beads is that he can only get little Inu up around Kagome or if he can smell her scent. (Maybe it was a miko spell to keep boyfriends faithful?) So he'll start showing up in her room to relieve himself. He'll also decide that since he's not getting any, that she can't either. That could lead to a lot of funny scenes. OK I feel better now. Make sure that Inuyasha pays for this. I mean he is a murderer...!
schedule January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Uber-Dark!! I love it so far; I'm already on the edge of my seat!! Gotta keep going with this one, for sure...as long as you don't neglect Hell Hath No Fury, that is!! ^_^ I love evil InuYasha, for some reason...not sure why. If he's not evil, he certainly seems as though he is right now! Damn...ripped the bitch's head off. *whistles* That's pretty serious. (I'd still do 'im, though....) XD

SQUEEE!! I love it! Update again when you can!

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