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Great update! Ooh, the tension is mounting, and I LOVE it! And yes, InuYasha is super-hot in this story...gotta love the evil side! Don't know what it is, but it just does it for me! :P Can't wait to see the next chapter and the "festivities!" XD

This is AWESOME!!! I absolutely love it... Can not wait to see how this is going to play out.

hey this is brilliant I have just read the first chapter and I had to stop and review otherwise I would have gone mad with excitement. It is amazing what u did with concept and I love cause its so different and definately dark and inuyasha a short of a beast but I could smell the domination coming and my panties leap for joy...lol. I love how u lay out the characters and storyline is interesting and has me asking alot of question, but I am mad at inuyasha for being such a heartless, souless bastard and heck if that is inuyasha what was sesshoumaru like in that position...? anyway I am so scared and frigthened for kags and the other girls and of the madness that these guys are going to put them through. And honestly inuyasha cant be killing so much without anyone having a clue where these girls are disappearing to, anyway gotta go back and read the rest.

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Scarlet

OMG OMG chapter 2 was brilliant poor rin oh lord, and gods they are goin to rape her and geez i actually loved the chenistry between miroku and rin and I wouldnt mind seeing that all i have to say is poor kohaku. Inuyasha is an asshole but i will never ask u to change him or redeem him, if u want to do that it your story I love how u lay everything out and hate ppl wanting to read dark dominating fic but wants the author to change their character just because thay dont like it (I read your reviews). Anyway I hope the girls find them and kags can kick his ass. And i cant wait to see how kags and inuyasha will meet. On to chapter 3

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Scarlet

lord excitement and drama, and I actually like kouga and kagome together in here I love his attitude and demeanour and I find myself wanting kagome and kouga to stay hooked up and not like inuyasha in this fic but that is just my preference, and congratulations on making me like kouga for kags more that inu cause that has never happened in the history of me reading fics...lol. I just want poor kags to find rin...lord I love this fic so please keep up the good work and update soon, and I just want kags to purify inuyasha sorry ass.

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Scarlet

Love it! Your writing is very original, which is such a nice change. Please update soon!

What Inuyasha's not a rapist? If he kidnaps Rin and then attempts to have sex with her against her will (drugged, drunk or not), then he is a rapist. I guess we'll see what happens. I hope Kagome finds out what is in his room and rescues Rin before it's too late. Maybe that is why you're not calling him a rapist? Kagome rescues Rin and keeps Inuyasha from doing the dirty with her? And sigh, he's a murderer...

I'm so sad with the Inuyasha in this story. Because he really doesn't seem to have one redeeming quality. I'm actually really liking Koga. He treats Kagome with respect, is very loving and she obviously returns his feelings. Yeesh, I don't like it when I want Kagome with Koga--but that's how I feel right now. I want to kick this stories' Inuyasha off a cliff--you know one with really sharp spiky rocks underneath...

OK. Let Kagome kick Inuyasha's butt! And I hope she throws a rosary on him! Grrrr....

BTW, Thank you so much for your review of AGL. That story is winding up now. A lemon or two and then there will be a final conclusion...

This story is getting seriously good. Please update soon.

*gasps*

*freaks out*

Awesome update, Sho-Chan!! Me likes it very much! ^_^ Also, just so you know, Marine recruit training is three months, not two, and they are *NOT* soldiers. Don't take that the wrong way; it's just that I'm a former Marine, and we don't like to be affiliated with the Army. It's a stupid pride thing. XD Oh, the stereotypes....

With that being said, I love that you made Kouga a Marine. Bad-ass!! He fits it well, I think. Tough, yet a little dim. *lmao* Hey, I was in it, so I can say it.

Oooh, I love InuYasha even more now. *nods* Yup. Evil, evil Inu. Come here, boy....

Yay!! Updates for this AND HHNF!! SQUEE!!! More, please!! :o) Update when you can, girlie!

Man, this is DEMENTED!
Sorry. still a little excitable. trying not to be, butttt....
anywhoey, this is kinda crazy, sho-chan! how could you write something so... dark! so... suspenseful! so... ewww.
I hope Rin gets outofit.
Yikes.